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I read this chapter five times. Five. Times. And each time I cry a little more at different moments. Let's start with the obvious one—the fireworks scene where all three of them end up huddled together on the grass. The author writes: "It was unclear who first leaned against whose arm, but when Sakura Haruno pulled her gaze away from the fireworks, she found Sasuke and Naruto sitting closely beside her." She assumes they have nowhere else to sit and doesn't move. Doesn't move. That's not nothing. That's everything. Naruto watching Sakura sleep at the foot of his bed and covering her with a blanket—this is the kind of quiet, platonic intimacy that hits harder than any romance scene. He's an orphan who's never had anyone care for him, and now he's the one doing the caring. When he says "Good morning" with a smile "brighter than the sun," I literally got goosebumps. But the moment that absolutely wrecked me was Sasuke's reaction to Sakura saying he's "definitely capable of more than just being a police force member." The text says: "Sasuke was momentarily stunned, then opened his mouth as if to say something before turning away, a flush creeping up from his ears. Was she... acknowledging him?" A flush. From EARS. This is a boy who has spent his entire existence seeking validation from a brother who tried to kill him, and here comes Sakura saying something casually kind and his entire emotional foundation cracks. The author doesn't dramatize it. No internal monologue, no dramatic pause. Just a flush and a question mark. And Sakura's wish—"I hope to live happily and peacefully, staying joyful until old age"—in a world where she's training to be a ninja and will face horrors beyond comprehension. Her simplest wish is also the hardest one to achieve. That's not foreshadowing, that's heartbreak dressed as hope. The CP energy here isn't romantic—it's something deeper. It's the kind of bond that forms when three broken kids find each other in the dark. And the author knows it, which is why every glance, every silence, every shared blanket feels so achingly real.
I genuinely enjoyed this novel, especially after rereading it through the human translation by Amawashi. Personally, I've read most of the novel using Google Translate from Kakuyomu, but I still found it incredibly engaging.
This novel is a slow burn, which means I often wanted to shake the two main characters and yell at them.
Interestingly, I feel like this novel was essentially a game of "Gay Chicken." The characters kept engaging in increasingly gay actions until their feelings became undeniable. I hope the upcoming chapters continue in this direction.
, the protagonists feel incredibly complex and their actions and emotions make sense. One of them even subconsciously lies to herself, making her an unreliable narrator, while the other's perspective is also unreliable. It’s ironically difficult to understand their true feelings until you grasp the nuances of how each one hides their emotions.
The only thing I missed from this novel that other novels often have are side characters. There is no side couple; it's solely focused on Miyagi and Sendai.
It's almost frustrating how obvious their feelings are for each other, yet they refuse to address the elephant in the room.
Again, I would rate this novel highly as I enjoyed the intense emotional rollercoaster of wanting to cheer in joy and then strangle someone in quick succession.
At first, it was promising. The initial chapters, the characters, and the events were engaging – not extraordinary, but definitely readable and entertaining. However, as the story progressed, it started to deviate, becoming increasingly complex, filled with plot twists and excessive reliance on主角光环, ultimately turning into a tedious read. By the time I reached chapters 40-50, I found myself reading only out of curiosity to see how it would end, rather than for enjoyment. It's baffling why I continued to read so far. If you're still interested, feel free to give it a shot, but for me, it's time to let go. Although it was an enjoyable start, the quality has now deteriorated to the point where I can no longer justify continuing.
I would rate it moderately. Initially, it was entertaining and the concept intrigued me. However, the male lead (ML) became increasingly irritating, causing me to skip many scenes involving him. His character lacked depth and didn't contribute much to the plot. The female lead (FL), on the other hand, was quite captivating.
The issue lies in the ML's underdeveloped nature. His one-dimensional personality often disrupted crucial moments, such as when he insisted on preventing the FL from minor mishaps, like pricking her finger, which seemed trivial. Even worse, he stopped time just to engage in unnecessary flirtation, disrupting the story's intensity and turning it into a repetitive annoyance. As I reached the middle of the book, I wasn't fully convinced by the romance.
Despite the engaging plotlines and fast-paced action, I believe the story would significantly benefit from removing the ML. The slap scenes were satisfying, and the plot variety was commendable, but his presence detracted from the overall experience.
The narrative is incredibly lighthearted, and I can easily devour the entire book in one day. FL's innocence and humor are delightful, and what adds even more enjoyment is the translator's knack for including the perfect memes at the end of each chapter.