I like the novel, therefore i will use my awesome powers as a reader to grant you 5 stars. The author for this novel isn't just one of "BaiSiwa's" fake accounts right?He doesn't give me the BaiSiwa feeling though... The feeling BaiSiwa gives is more like he's a demon from hellZombieSpy on the other-hand gives a more childish feeling (I like that... It's cute).
This is a bad rip off anime with minimal quality and a lacking of an interesting story. The main character is bland and the writing and exposition leaves much to be desired all in all I would recommend not wasting your time reading the book.
So let’s review this story, I’ll be honest the story ain’t exactly groundbreaking in any way, however I still do enjoy it a bit. My main problems with the story mostly comes from the lack of editer, I’m not sure if it’s just me, but I feel the stories writing feels incredibly hectic at points, not in a fast paste way, but just jumping really quickly between various actionsThe characters are shockingly more fleshed out than your typical wuxia novel which is honestly surprising to me so kudos to you on that Game mechanics are iffy at best and awful at worst, I generally dislike the perma death game thing that a few novels have, xp distribution is also a bit questionable. I feel like author could have benefitted from just making it a system novel with a gate system like “super gene”My best suggestion to you author would be find a friend you trust to give an honest opinion and make him proof read it a little bit
I like this fiction so far. It's solid. Character development is decent, story development is decent.I really think that this is a good foundation for continuing forward. Importantly, the main character stands out as vibrant and interesting.First, the narrative is ok. It follows a straight line of progress and in the first 10k written it did not deviate. Second, since it is a system-based world, expect the blue window and a lot of notification.I am looking forward to how the story pans out.
Nice story, easy to understand for non-english first language. Writer put much effort tp create detail of story and that thing make my imagination rich with Story.. And i hope for fast update. Hehe
The biggest mistake of this author wasn't that he created this stupid MC.The biggest mistake was that he made that absurd background of MC building multi-billion dollar company in 5 years from scratch Iike Cmon.??HOW...HOW did he accomplished that with that brain huh. Did he find oil he in his mommy backyard.
Ahh ! My guy Lin fan. I know it’s lonely to be invincible. ?Ur truly also...,..,,.., ..................................Lonely bcuz invisible ?.
Sends wives away at some point to some random far distant realm, might as well be Awespec with how the author forces bad circumstances
A rather depressing read. I only took a look up to chapter 33 as it is currently free to read today.Overall I found the MC to be an egotistical, narcissistic chap. Basic synopsis is a wealthy 35 yr old guy meets his end with truck-kun and finds himself back in the past about to start university. Already begins to plan for his wealth rise and takes steps to achieve this early. He does this not for anyone else but for himself which is a bit honest but doesn’t give any meaning for why he has been reborn. Not sure if it will be harem or not as there is a few LI’s around, however the MC is this time fixated on the timid, low social class girl in his class, think the only reason was that she looked good and had some accomplishments later.Overall this book doesn’t have any soul and I find it hard to connect or feel anything in this novel. It just doesn’t encourage me to want to read more. I give it 2.5/5 just because the translation looked good.
OMG. I don’t know why authors prefer this type of novels with no logic. Just by reading first 10 chapters i’m so frustated and my mood turn to verse ruining my entire day.
So far this novel has a great start, the system is definitely interesting and a fresh take on such things and the MC is a pretty decent guy and being an artist is a definitely change from the usual MC. If it keeps or exceeds this quality in the future I definitely give it top ratings for being worth reading start to finish.
I like the story so far but the person translating it has been splitting single chapters and making it into multiple chapters. reading the raw you can see that where chapter 35 on here is it would actually be chapter 25 im the raw.