Shameless Review :DThis is my first book and there might be mistakes (which I try my best for it to not appear). The story might start off slow, but I wanted to take into account the actions of everyone(or every entity/organization) around him (protagonist). One chapter took me a lot of rewrites to get it logical. I also didn't want to info dump as that's just going to make you forget a lot of things.
I need another assurance, sorry for being too paranoid...there won't be any Netorare or Netorase right? it's just the protagonist doing the stealing right? the synopsis does explain that system helps him NTR other people, but talking about the story in general, there won't be any future Netorare/Netorase right?
thanks good novel. 2 free chapters please
Hello Author! You did a good job on making a novel. I checked your profile and I was surprised to see that you are a girl. The way you wrote your story is better than most "boy authors" in this platform. I am going to give you my whole support (Power stones of my different accounts) since it was quite eccentric to know that a girl made this amazing novel (I am not discriminating women as a whole but I expected that women are quite proficient in making romantic novels ) Thank you
Honestly, hard to place this one. I've read 7 chapters and in that span, the MC has gone from unable to speak (a pretty cool handicap) to able to speak. MC got a great power which he wants to keep secret for good reasons, but then a chapter later thinks poorly of other characters who got a similar ability and kept it secret. MC wants to be powerful, but also wants to leave his destiny to fate instead of trying to get stronger on his own. MC wants to be careful, but then does risky stuff and almost dies several times for no reason. If the author would choose something and stick with it, this *could* have been an interesting novel. This wishy washy stuff doesn't work for me, unfortunately.
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this is not a serious novel, just another clumsy novels who write it for fun or for some other reason, this story doesn't have much potential, the MC brain functions in a weird way, the MC got only one track of mind, that is harem harem harem which takes out all the good things in this novel, the author makes it sound like the MC is one of the greatest young master, all I can see is a wimpy pervert spoiled brat who would lick a women shoes to get her thigh, the MC brain is so dense that he cannot understand anything outside of pervert women zones.
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A very strong female lead of this book, and I can't help but to love the MC. Great potential in the story.
It's a good story and love it so far....give it a try once??????..........???????...............??????????..............????????
Two lost people who met by accident or... maybe it wasn't an accident, but a fate, their destiny to cross each other path... The plot is so intriguing, the two main characters also. You pay attention to the language you use so it's a pleasure to read.Excellent work!
That game is weirdly exciting. I can't wait for him to play the puzzle. It sure gotta give me chills and hopefully not a heart attack. The anticipation itself is making me ...