ahh...this story is just like Child of Light, but it's a sequel I think. It turns out the author actually uses the same concept as Child of light but after some chapters, the story really changed. I think it's good. well good luck
The concept is good. The story is simple and straightforward almost like a children’s fairytale. Now for the not so good bit:The MC has the IQ of a doorknob and constantly whines besides getting everything anyone could ever wish for in the given setting. This bit gets repetitive and way too annoying. Most of the MC’s vocabulary consists of the phrase “huh?!”. The fights are ridiculous. A dozen apprentice level kids holding off a demon army while most of them are in a one on one situation while the mc ponders over moves and goes “huh?!” every time he sees anthing move.The grammar is atrocious. This needs an editor.
I rate this based on what i read...It was all good...Don't let me down man...................................................................................
Author Review Here, Don't Read This Book...Save your coins and time, it was my very first book and truth be told, it had no outline and was written with the flow.I was young and inexperienced.I underestimated the work it took to write a novel but I'm glad I did this because I have gained experience.Very important experience.I came back after 2 years hiatus to warm up and use it to regain my form and boy, was it worth it.So you can check out my other books, don't worry.No more abandoning.
Why are there only 40 chapters? Has anyone had raw for this?
Well, I said it was a good concept, but that I didn’t like the characters in my first review, and now I’m even more adamant on that. Now, the MC is just the dog of the woman who should be the real protagonist of this novel since she’s just better overall. It’s really pathetic how the main character is weaker than almost everyone. I mean… he’s even weaker than a butler for gods sake.
A superb read! Double thumbs up. Highly recommended and I promise you, when you check this novel out, you'll want more chapters. :)) So, join me and read!
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To many POV
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Its a good book.
So far the story is pretty good, and I hope author don't abandon this. ???????????????????????????????????????