This book is really well written so far(chapter 71) hope you continue to put effort into keeping this updated.
The story line is refreshing, different from what I'm used to in this app, but there are some grammatical errors, but overall, it is amazing, but I'm really hoping the author would update more chapters.
good story, with some typos but nice to ready
I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the flow of the story needs improvement. I don't think necessary for leaving player mode, quite confusing
HmmmHloo everyone I hope you guys alll like the story so far I am always Making necessary improvements in story so you guys can enjoy it...As you guys have already noticed I have changed the name of the storyThis will make the story more interesting as far as I can see so I hope you all love the story and as I have already announced volume 3 will be released after one week now only 5 days are remaining
The plot is really good. I haven't read many sci fi books so I don't have much to compare this with but I liked the book :)Also, there are many punctuation errors especially with your periods and commas so you should go through the book and fixed that. Keep writing, author!
the book is really good and I love it, there are however a few big problems which hurt the book a lot, I'm over two hundred chapters in so I don't know if it gets fixed later on, but the author just keeps nerfing the mc with his stats, he will have 98 strength and add 16 stat points to it and it becomes 100, or he will get a food buff and it will get rid of some of his stats, or one of his skills will level up 3-4 times and it will stay the same level
The novel itself is great and it's very unique and the way that the author writes is amazing and I haven't seen any grammar mistakes from the chapters I have read.The way that the author shows the emotion of the characters are great and the details shown in the novel is great as well and I really enjoyed it especially because it's fantasy.So all in all it's a great novel and if your checking it out you should definitely give this a read if you have time.
The novel is good. The sentence structure could use some fixing. Too many run on sentences and some periods or commas could help. Grammar could also use a little tweaking. Author just has to make sure that he goes over what he writes or just use grammarly.
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