Very good so far! I'm pleased to see the concept the author has made play out so naturally, so far nothing has felt forced, and the MC's character is interesting in a good way!Looking forward to more chapters, good luck author!TL:DR
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Not my cup of tea.But this one had great potential, things do seem to get better as the story progressed but this is complete TRASH! (atleast for me)You can go ahead and read it, if you don't mind how mc acts or the writing and character interactions.
I might not be your biggest fan but im up there. I'm waiting for reverse apocalypse to come out of hiatus and waiting for Supreme lord to get farther along before I start reading again. I'm not even getting on web novel till there is more than a day or two of reading. I'm literally waiting in suspense for any work from you.
I am your biggest fan.Never forget that. I made you to who you are today.Top 1 fan contribution - Entrail_JIThat aside, story really good.
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Another system novel where MC intelligence shows author is either 5 years old or mentally handicapped. He sells things that are worth hundreds of gold for couple pieces of silver and yet everyone thinks he's such an amazing and cunning person while the rest of the novel is spent simping on every woman that comes across and acting like a dog despite being the son of the most powerful man in the entire region...
I was just randomly going through cultivation novels when my paths crossed with this master piece. Well, at least not less than a work worth recognition. Here are my thoughts about this amazing novel: 1. The world building is amazing (Although it comes late into action)2. The fights are amazing3. Amazing cultivation concept 4. The video game elements are mixed together with the apocalypse genre perfeclty. Good work, best of luck.
Everything is amazing, the writing is realistic and allows a reader to follow the MC's train of thought. The characters also react in mannerisms that are also realistic, hunting prey, safe areas vs not ready to go there, holding grudges for fitting acts, a realistic form of PTSD, the MC isn't full of main character syndrome, bartering in shops.
The stability of updates is absolutely consistent, there is almost always 1, sometimes 2, chapters a day, the releases are enough that I can always come back at least once a day to read more about my favorite owls.
The story development is smooth and flows from each area to the next in a way that helps understand the transitions from 1 arc to the next, an example being from hatchling to the ruins. (Keeping vague so as to avoid spoilers.)
Character design is peak quality in that the history constantly shapes how the characters react, and when parts are shared, with others, the reactions from others are reasonable and make even some background characters feel more 3 dimensional.
As for world background, it's slowly expanding in much the same way our main owl discovers new things, every new discovery makes me happier as I see her explore more and see more things.
Overall 11/10
Gimmie more owl.
What can I say... this is a great novel. Love the well researched history of the Crusades, Templars and how it melts into the novel. The pace is a bit slow at first but it gets better as you keep on reading it.If you're a fan of historical fiction, this is it for you!