idk about this book. it gives me mixed signals. it seems realistic about cliches on one hand and on the other I want to argue against everything it stands for. it's a conundrum. however it is an original take on cliches so it's worth a shot to open your views on other books.
Hello everyone,It's been a month and over 30,000 words since I released the first chapters, since we're right in front of the 50k words mark, I feel it's time to do a decent review of what I think of the novel, myself.Before I start, I would like to say a few things. At first, I started writing out of boredom, but before I knew it, I was absorbed in my own story and I started to enjoy writing for the story itself. It was both fun and pain sometimes going from work to writing, from writing to bed, and back to work, every.single.day.However, I still managed to deliver quite a lot of chapters, even though it was my first time writing. So let's see what I think about the novel so far.The first ten chapters are both good and bad. They are sophisticated but not perfectly delivered, there are grammatical errors and some chapters are boring to read. However, lately, I've been trying to go through them again and polish them as much as I can without changing any information for people who have already read them.If you survive those chapters the writing should get better with each chapter, it's still a bit messy until chapter 25 or 26 when I started to pay a lot more attention to how I write.The progress of the story is a bit slower, but from the 19th chapter, you can look forward to a series of actions. But don't worry because some of the actions are in the earlier chapters as well.I've also increased the word count in each chapter with almost every new release. Or at least compared to the first 10 chapters.With the current latest chapter, I delivered what I wanted. And we can now start a new saga. A saga of friendship and companions, rivals and enemies, and much more. Please look forward to the next chapters.
10/10 very good a lot of lemon high quality writing hot characters and a varietys of personalities and the lemon scenes are very hot and sexy
This chapter is my favorite chapter the details you put in your chapter is immeasurable, the way you described the characters is great. Keep up the good work.
Nice book, already caught up hung on it, can't just wait for the next chapter, love the setting, and everything about the book, kudos author,
this is probably the best one in this batch....................
Started out great and Could have been one of the best but I had to Drop mostly because Mc is boring and constantly weaker then the FLs. Maybe he gets stronger then them eventually but I’m not going to waste coins nor skip half the story to ge to that point.
I have be reading this book for long time, I never thought I get to seeing this book in this webnovel. I love you story, I waiting for finished novels.
Why does Webnovel bring back novels that are trash, do you think second time is a charm in this scenario? The other NEW novels were put on hold for a week due to this novel
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It's good start, hope author not drop it bcs I like this kind of novel, like stronghold in the apocalypse, but it's shame author most likely drop it
Translation Quality - Decent from what I can tell from first impressions.Stability of Updates - Not sure yet, will wait until it is picked.Story Development - It feels like the author has taken a lot of inspiration from Pokemon, but set the story in a real world setting. From my initial read it feels like the story is well paced, by which it takes months rather than days for the MC to become powerful (But he still isn't the best even with the system).Character Design - The characters are quite refreshing when compared to some of the cliches that appear on this website. However, this story can feel like a Pokemon fan-fiction at some points. For example, the author uses different names but similar descriptions for the various Sprites, which can come across as weird and overly-long to read at times.World Background - From what I can tell it has a slice of life feel to it and the various places visited are appropriately described. The main setting so far involves school and the city, with the various other countries and organisations that are explained early on. Overall, a decent read but it would feel easier to read if the Sprite names were shortened to something more manageable (Just a personal Preference).