I like the way how the character has been described, easy to read and sticky to keep reading. Waiting for new material and stories!
I love it, but the chapter release is toooooo sloooow.... I will give it a 4.4⭐⭐⭐⭐❤❤❤❤❤???? Keep up the good work, ok????????????
Fantastic book. One of the best I've seen on the site. The world building is excellent and terrifying. There's some deep plot happening here in the background. Please vote for this so we find out what happens!!!
I have read many web novels over the years, one of them being the current #2 in the Original category and I believe that this story has the potential to rival “Reborn: Evolving from nothing” after some more character development. I think I’ll be spending all my energy and power stones on this series for a while. Keep up the good work, your doing great!
First review on this site. How perfect for it to be used on your amazing story. Already stated that you have a knack for writing, you’re able to pull readers into your story with simplicity, the way you describe the world in a view that it almost seems it’s coming from the character themselves. Another note to illuminate is your characters introduced so far all seem different, lifelike. I hope you continue writing.
To start off it wasn't the best. He relied on his spirit too much and it didn't seem like Novis as a character would be built much. However, when he got an interest in the game the development was great. Love the book. Please update more??
Absolutely love this story. When you see the smart mc tag on a novel or fanfic. You always think that the mc will be smart, but then they do something stupid. But this mc is a f*cking genius. Absolutely great story.
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Here before the “ugh another sing-in novel” messages
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I like the story until the gods got involved, I didn't like the prove your worth test when he's 95% compatability and it's been feeding off him, putting in the place where he need the system in the first place.The system made the problem that it the solved, that can be taken away,because gods don't think he should have it.
So opinion of the first 20 chapters is not bad nor good just average and all 20 chapters take place in the span of 2 or 3 days so it is super slow paced and the fact it follows a 3 year old makes it worse