Great, straight and very stable book so far... Not sure it will reach the great heights of author's previous books but it is going along well... Would have been unique if his Dimensional Clones were connected by a hive mind to the first clone... And as he improve he would have to improve his brainwave... This way the Dimensional Clones feel unique and not like every other clone out there...
Story in a nutshell...Side character to Chen Beixuan: Hey, I challenge you. What? Cat got your tongue already..? Heh?! What a wuss!Chen: Courting Death!!
That's much beyond my expectations. The hype and actions you will feel in the first few chapters will make you want to keep reading. And when you will read the last chapter, you will be left wondering about the story and would wish for more chapters. UPLOAD MORE CHAPTERS! Yes, that was for you author.
actually, this is a nice story. The plot of the story is super exciting and it makes me want to read it more.keep it up, author.good luck with your future.
The story has Potential but I don’t like how the mc goes about his Decisions cause he had the perfect opportunity to get as strong as possible put then only gets a little bit stronger. Other than that there are some pretty deadweight characters that he is lugging around that i would not mind much if they were killed off. Other than that I like it and will probably keep reading after more chapters upload cause I am all caught up.
Such a wholesome read! Audience can really bond with the protagonist with the way they were portrayed, Hina is so wholesome! Interesting story, great plot, nice character description. 10/10 In my reading list.
after reading the title i know this is just garbage it is ok to read if you ignore common sense (logic) and savage society watching 8 years old survive in the forrest.this is the same as other not make sense novels.
well gonna give this 5 star and hope u not gonna drop this story ....................................... ............ ......................
Realmente es bueno aunque los capítulos salen lentos al menos es muy buena historia sigo diciendo ya falta poco para llegar alos 100 capitulos ya ando más ansioso ya que va por momentos buenos en lantrama
I'd grade the writing quality anywhere from B+ to A- approximately. No major grammatical errors, and the author's more than satisfactory command of English already places him miles ahead of at least half the other writers over here on WN. As for the story itself, reading this takes me back to the .hack franchise I used to love playing through (and watching) in my teens.Lastly, with regard to points for improvement? There's really not much I have on that end, considering what's already been written is already very good. The one bit of general advice I'd say applies here is to go back to your material and proofread it at least once or twice a month for any grammatical errors you may have missed at an earlier point.Well done overall.
I am rating you five stars.Your story plot is very nice!Apart from a few grammatical errors, Everything is fineNice plot tooAnd one thing I like about it is that you always update on time
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