Harem but only ended up with one woman? Can someone clarify to me how that happened? Did the others die or something?
Sounds good👍Just added it to my never-ending list of a library
those ambushes were pretty annoying
I just read some absolute b*ll*cks. the author didnt give two sh*ts about making this a bit realistic (tho transmigration and parallel world are unrealistic)
There is indeed something wrong with his brain, but its actually quite fun and mc is not sc*mb*g
Gold diggin manipulative hoes
noice
117. If many people like Meng Xu could think something like, "Only people who were related by blood could possibly look similar, right?" Then I guess the face slapping event won't happen frequently
IT WAS A GREAT STORY,BUT SOMETIMES EREN IS NOT HIMSELF
I decided to re-upload the review after reading more chapters.good novel a tragic beginning which creates empathy for the reader, endearing characters. But also excellent update stability.But I find this novel quite childish, the first chapter shows that the mc is a bit naive. It's weird because I'm used to cool, cruel, ruthless Mcs.As said in the other comment, there is a lot to improve.Ps English is not my mother tongue so sorry for the mistakes
one of the best novels you've made. Good mystery. Good action. Everything is just good overall wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
This novel has an interesting premise. That, however, is quite literally the only positive aspect of the novel, in my opinion. Interactions are highly superficial, depictions of the wealthy and nobility are skewed, and the characters are so bland that it makes you wonder if any thought was put into making them come across as humans. From the very beginning, there are some plot points that take away from the reading experience. The main character, who is supposedly 10 years old, acts like a robot. The author seems to believe that blind people are also emotionless. The plot is also severely lacking, progressing so quickly that it creates utter disbelief. The whole process, from the protagonist getting adopted by his foster family to the publication of his first book and the establishment of his own company, takes mere months. The protagonist publishes (plagiarizes) a masterpiece like The Hobbit while having been blind for most of his life without the necessary education or an adequate sense for the intricacies of literature. It is justified with the excuse of him being a genius, but that makes no sense. I doubt that there exists a single ten-year-old in the world who has such an astounding grasp of the language and an innate understanding of the challenges that come with being a writer. Granted, that is not his own ability, but everyone apart from the protagonist believes otherwise, which contradicts basic common sense. These, of course, are just a few examples of the jarring plot points that shifted my perspective from that of a reader to that of a critic. Finally, I would still like to congratulate the author for taking the difficult step of writing this novel. Although my review might seem extremely harsh, I hope that the author, assuming that my review comes to their attention, understands that my frustration towards this novel stems from the fact that it shows a lot of wasted potential.