I started it today and I know I won't be getting any sleep until I've caught up. Thoughtfully written!
This is great work!
Repeated chapters… a lot.
45 chapters 2-5-24
More pl ! Omg how stupid was he !!! N that Nate grrrrr he is a Dick ! How often you update ? Love the story so far
Great book - hoping for a second book or epilogue to help resolve the characters stories a bit more.
Really good story can’t wait for updates
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nice book nice author
Please update soon!
Nice story. The first chapter is a hooker
In the narrative, the author lavishes excessive attention on the main character (MC), which can border on unrealistic and predictability. There are numerous convenient plot points that seem to grant the MC extraordinary fortune. Although the word "exquisite" is overused, which draws attention, the English translations are generally well-done.
However, there are two minor plot inconsistencies that detract from the storytelling. The lack of depth in the ghost encounters makes the story unscary and low on suspense. The author's handling of ghost stories feels rushed, with quick summaries and resolutions without much development. This approach also appears in the MC's acting career arc.
The story starts strong but loses its appeal around halfway, causing frustration and weariness. By the time I reached Chapter 126, my interest in the MC, the main love interest (ML), and the story itself had waned significantly.
Despite my critique, I am left wondering – can an author truly develop feelings for their fictional character? It almost seems that way, but I might be misinterpreting the author's intentions.