Sad to say that the story for this novel has devolved over time. While interesting at first, everything is given to the protagonist conviently and its incredibly boring to read the same slice of life interactions over and over again. Who gives a **** that Da Zi is hungry? That's a minor detail
Really nice story, hopes he stays true to his evil desires and gets all the women he wants to be his. Can't wait to read more of it. Please don't drop it.
The novel has a cool and fun story but the already bad grammar gets worse after the free chapters, which makes it difficult to read and continue reading the novel.
I love this story and the premises of it but I just have a couple things that I feel like for me are lowering the quality of the story. I have gotten to like chapter 105+ and I hate that we spent more chapters on the two girls he meant randomly than his parents and his family. I’d love to see some authentic family interactions not just when the MC wants something or is informing them of something. They fought to have him so we should see more of this relationship. Second is I wish we have more character development for the MC cuz half the time he is emotionless and we barely see his emotions to people around him. I wish the story revolved around more about his family, school/teachers and maybe his other careers and business. The harem thing is way to early for him as just a 11 yr old and it just feels weird. Either way I’m barely hanging on to stay with this story and not give up half way so hopefully things get better down more chapters.
Truly, this is a special original novel and I love the unique storyline.
So much promise. Background, kingdom building, wars. However the stupid insert forced nonsense from the author changed so much. Whether keeping his chinese name in an Orc world but being called something else by everyone else. And also naming his orc legions (azure vermillion, etc). Not even the worst as he constantly saves female damsels in distress that are humans and puts his people in danger. Oh and the over sexualizing of the females in the novel is beyond frustarting. Author will never respond to any complaint from numerous readers up to chapter 22 at least. Thats when I dropped this headace
I just got to chapter 768 so I'm writing a second review.This novel is a solid 3, it's an interesting read but it's a slightly bad novel along that fine line where it's bad, but not bad enough for you to drop the novel if you like the concept.The biggest problem with this novel does not follow the classic showing instead of telling, this novel in fact tells as much as it shows and much of the story, even deep and emotional moments are told with summaries instead of actually written and described.A precise example is "Alex spoke for 15 minutes at the grave" when he was visiting a loved one's grave or "Alex explained about the pill
A well made book. It covers a large number of different genres while being planned for a significant number of chapters. And while it’s a bit dark its done well enough that it is not the usual depressing or grim that most dark series wind up becoming
Be warned! The problem is it’s a great story that’s already been dropped twice. Now the latest news was the author started doing chapters then dropped a 10 chapter premium and nothing since. If it was weekly updates I’d probably buy them as they dropped iut of premium because the story is great. It’s dual cultivation but there’s actually a story and struggles. But with no updates for months if not longer then a few a premium drop and nothing can’t justify unlocking those 10 chapters they aren’t enough to finish the story so why pay extra for another cliffhanger.
Incredible! Author you have been placed high on my favorite list. I didn’t want this book to end! Great storyline, written well, awesome characters, good twists and turns and kept my interest. Ready for the next great completed read.
When do you do updates?
wonderful read