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great story so farIt also has a great sense of humourI give 5 stars on all aspects besides updates.pro tip for author samawhen beginning a novel you want to bind a lot of readers which like the novel so far to your story, no better way in achieving this than updating daily. (even if chapters will be a bit shorter this way) If there arent lots of chapters already available and updates are slow, lots of people dont bother with your novel
raw link please, also is this translated or an original because i cant find raws. comments should not be less than 140 characters.......................
Buenísima, muy entretenida.......................................................................................................................
I really liked the stoy and the world set up, the story itself is compelling. It is more interesting than the novels in which the MC has to escape/fight his relatives from his mother's/ father's side. Of course there are few cheats like he is good at everything like alchemy, blacksmith and arrays.Overall the MC' s character is fell flushed out, in the begining he is innocent and naive but that changes as the the story continues. The fighting is good.I would like to see more politics and betrayal in the story.I like MC' s MOM she is badass, powerfull but she is also gentle and warm towards her family. I think the author should focus a little more on his mom.CAN anyone tell me when will the next chapter be released?
