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Negtives
Awfull grammer
Stale dialogue
Mental deficient Mc
The world has terrible common sense
Positive
Has potential if the author just downloads Grammarly
this isn't wish fulfillment ......no this is god tier DREAM fulfillmentidkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts
It's just to stupid and makes me angry by the second reading it.
I read a few chapters and then I came to know that there will be a prostitute in his harem. And I don't like that idea so I dropped it..........................
Fantastic. That is what came to my mind when I finished binge reading all of this book’s chapters. Lately I’ve been reading original stories because of the translated novels here not meeting any of my standards. And here I found a true gem with this book.The plot is fleshed out nicely and the characters have a smooth growth. The Mc’s personality is level headed and his action reasonable. There is no BS of him not having a backbone - he stands up for himself, but not in the arrogant/stupid type way. It’s also really satisfying to see how he deals with his enemies (He doesn’t let them push him around and refutes with facts and logic). Even though it took a bit of time for the limitless cheat to actually appear chapterwise (I wont say what it is), it wasnt too long and plot flowed nicely. All in all great job author with what youve accomplished so far and good luck!
nice for a beginner work
I sense talent and potential from this although has a few gaps or issues here and there it doesn't spoil the reading experience
please update, we need more chapters these can't satisfy our hunger, they just stuck in our teeth hence we were not even able to enjoy them please update them
in my opinion this novel Synopsis, is the most interesting from all this group of the Pilot Read, there is so much to enjoy and have fun in this story, very hope that it will be pick up for the Trial Read, and we can really enjoy a good 40 chapters, and who knows! it may be pick there for a series too, from all of them this is the very best :)
Translation for free chapters are excellent. After the free chapter, it went downhill. It is still readable but not as consistent as the free chapters. For example, his first summon is called "yellow" then became "ah Huang" or it was called"yellow scarf soldier to "yellow bandana". it will rattle your reading immersion a little bit.
grammar is so bad that its hard to follow what's happening at times which makes it hard to enjoy
waste garbage nothing but pure reputation and no story someone says u r from evil sect everyone belives it blah blah and then another one say u r too and they also believe it i don't know which newbie wrote this but it's trash not worthy of wasting your time
This book has potential but author is developing the story too fast and because I think that English is not author's first language so the chapters can be very confusing at some points. Aside from MC the other characters lack background.