FreyaJocelyn
Wow! I really like the synopsis! It was nice! The title is kinda long and hope it is more minimal. But nonetheless, the story is absolutely good. Looking forward to this book!
A Game Novel? A GAME NOV-- WAIT A RING?! YES A RIN-- ITS ALMIGHTY?! ITS FKIN ALMIG-- FACE SLAPPING SCENES?! FACE SLAPPI-- A COMEDY NOVEL?! A COMED-- IM IN.
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Whooo!It's back!Thank you so much.I'm giving 5 stars!Dang it, I'm want to cry. Finally, this is back!So grateful!Here's my 5 stars!I'm going to continue giving you my power stones!5 stars! 5 stars! 5 stars!
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Very good, read it ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ..........
this is an interesting stroy. i have enjoyed it so far.
Whenever i read i nee book/webnovel, i always need a start that captivates me, this has done just that and i plan to keep reading. The world building has made things both indepth and understandable at the same time.
OMG IT'S UPDATING AGAIN OH MY GOODDDDD YIPPEEEE!!!I get to see Fina, Old Time Tea, Galaxy, Richard, Han Fei AND THE OTHER CHARACTERS I HAVE FORGOTTEN THE NAME OF WOW! I'm so happy I'm going to re-read this!!
the concept is great and new.there are less fanfics in this genre.I just hope you will stop the s*x jokes and stop spoiling the story.I really enjoyed other than that part.low rating only because of the s*x jokes part as it is occupying major part of the story.well i know that this is your fanfic I am just suggesting this as it will make story more enjoyable.
FIVE STAR / Smiley Face :)Very good, I'm like it........................................................................................................
It was interesting. But it becomes repetitive with the mc coincidentally meeting a friendly ghost, kills a villain and expanding his shop to scare people. After the 9x times there is nothing In the mc life excepting getting more ghosts. He doesn't even have a full sleep in months.You will know almost nothing about the mc world. Everything introduced are either victims and the world mc live in looks like 90% ghosts looking for you and the 10% just don't give a damn. His city alone has so many deaths with serial killers everywhere. Who in the right mind would go to mc horror house when you see deaths everywhere everyday?
