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Nice. Story is just the thing I was looking for thank you. Moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee
the book is so good not gonna lie. must read
This is one of my most favorite novels in webnovel, for a man of culture, this novel is a must have..it's fun and easy to read, the h scene is creative and naughty, thumps up
i like cultivation books and system books most and this is the combination of both.it is a promising book with a lot of adventures and fun. looking forward to it
In sorry but i will drop it... In the early chapter i like the story but... At the end it dissapointed meI already read it until chapter 200+ and you know, MC died again! He reincarnated again but its still ok, the problem is after he reincarnated, the story becomes Really boring!
When I read a novel, I like to become engrossed in the story and immersed in it, the constant use of "chickie nuggies" in the beginning completely destroys the immersion for me. It is overused to the point of becoming annoying. Another issue is that the world seems completely static without the MC. I.e First encounter of a boar & cultivator. They had been dead for days, but no predator in a spirit beast forest approached for a free meal. Only a mouse appeared when the MC arrived. The second encounter caused a large explosion which uprooted trees and either killed everything within 10km radius or caused it to flee out of range, when he is only 20km from a large city hosting 6 million people of which 30% are cultivators. Yet no one finds this strange and comes to investigate what happened... Not even during the 7 days in which the MC passes out beside the crater. An explosion of that magnitude would easily be heard by every person within 50km. The concept seems interesting and the writing quality is not terrible, but it feels like an insane mode test of willpower to make it past the first 20 chapters to see if things start to get better.
If you want to read this then I advise for you to turn off your brain and just skim through this trial novel.. It contains simp MC, stupid MC, and MC always complaining about the system.Sidenote: MC after receiving the system becomes stupid and becomes a mindless simp...Writing Quality ★ ★ ★• Translation is great not like the previous trial novels which are basically worse than MTL..Story Development ★• Wish fulfillment novel, MC got a system by having cold, he gave a pill to his "ugly" classmate and when he saw the face under the hair, he was enlightened and became a simp. He ate a super brain pill and made the teacher dumpfounded.Character Design ★• It's a meh, imagine giving an adult a phone and they didn't know how to use it, instead of figuring it out they just cry and complain... ChildishUpdsting Stability ★ ★ ★ ★ ★• Nothing to say hereWorld Background ★• Just China...
l love it it's so nice I will recommend it to anyone who loves reading. I wish the author the author all the best in their carrier as an author keep doing the good work
Good job, you created an English version so that it can be enjoyed by readers around the world. I hope they enjoy your story as much as I enjoy reading every novel you create
Highly recommended. The mc is thoughtful and acts reasonable according to situation. He isn't thoughtless or highly emotional and acts like any other decent human being which makes him highly relatable. The side characters are also well fleshed out and actually feel like they have depth. E.g. the character descriptions are not all "a peerless beauty with jade like skin" and just end there. There are actually well described traits and personality.At c10 there is a hint of a larger plot developing which solidifies further reader inticement - but so far it has mainly been about his own self improvement, which has carried the story well enough till now. The world is a bit vague, but as it is relatable to current times, it is understandable why the author hasn't put more time into describing the world - it isn't worth it and the reader can interpolate well enough on their own.Overall it's a series that's on my top read list and I highly loom forward to future releases - I just hope that they can release daily and quickly.
So it's a story of particle physicist - a person who study interaction of particles, look like a scientist to me, wonders whether this will a cultivation story where a person uses scientific knowledge to solve his problems, since it's about particle it may be about Qi or its composition or whatever it is, though I think I will give this story a try since it is given in notes that the MC will a cunning person and I'm really looking forward.... **: Rating will change depending on the novel...
really like it i do appreciate the concept of this novel first then i admit that the author gave an admirable hard-working writtings with good-built future bases for what is comming???????
