HiI don't usually post review but making an exception cause this story has frustrated me a lot.Let's get over with the good parts. No grammar errors and i am thankful of that. Bad grammar is always a plus and the writer does his job in it. Updates daily and maybe twice a day still a plus.Let's pass on world background now. Well here the things start to get a little awkward(at least for me). The mc comes from a small small (maybe to small) of a village and has no idea whatsoever how big the world is. Nothing bad until here. The plot starts and he is in the run cause he has a forbidden realm. And here i lost it cause the mc is being hunted from the academy (for that mainly and for killing some academy mages but that happens later). He get's the training done and it's the typical mc that loves body refinement before the mage training. Lack of patience is seen at all the things that have to do with everything having to do with magic but in those related to body refinement none and are accepted as a rule or whatever (reminds me of the chinese cultivation novels horrible ones). The mc is rash and a lot, does stupid things sometimes and can't seems to find the solution where a logical one is at sight. Ex. at the latest chapters he moves from a valley to another to join the Shadowflame Society and there he participates in the tournament to get a chance to get noticed and the **** hits the fan. Power struggle from the clan that governs that valley(different factions to get the power inside the same clan have different ideas about the future 3 main ones).Confronted with the choices he has to make he gets an all time ''**** hits the fan'' situation by the one he choses. [In my opinion the best outcome the author could make there was to have him move to another valley. Whats the big deal his friend is not with him as a companion anymore and he can go to avoid more troublesome situation. But no the logical way its not the way of the story. At the end what would have cost him? Some more months to get to travel maybe a year but what's a year for the people who are mages and body refiners. They usually train for decades or a century to pass a stage meaning the live for far far to long.]Starting with the story development. I didn't get literally jack **** in this one. Like from all the basic info the mc knows nothing. The problem is he has teachers(albeit temporary ones) and even 2 gods(proclaimed from the 2 people he met no idea is it's true but from their power they seem legit) that confront him about his choice. His enemies seems to duplicate with every new place he visits and i was starting to think this would be another xianxia ****. The characters have their own personality mostly. Enemies are usually described as mobs and the others except the mc only a passing by cause why expand on someone that wont be in the next chapter.The mc however is total .......... (don't know what insult to throw at him anymore). As a mentioned early is totally rushing in situation and when he does think over a situation every damn situation flies away every time a fight starts. When given the chance to practice his realms and body refinement in the prison cell given from one of the self proclaimed gods [golden opportunity study for 100 years and become strong food included a new realm yes no enemies cause they have no idea where you are] what he does? He takes an overdose of ''real opening pills'' (10 or so) and leaves in less than a year cause he couldn't handle the loneliness that the place caused. What does he expect to have power handled in a golden plate here have some of this and this and a sprinkle of that one. Now as the author says taking to many of these ''realm opening pills'' causes you to do booom and all the place is like a red paintball battlefield (basically what happens to normal people on earth when they take to much of something without the booom) and the mc survives. How come ????/ Why???/ Just for plot advancement???/ Seriously it needs and explanation and a good one at that. Finally the fu***** forbidden realm that he is hunted for. Again we know jack **** for that one cause author mentions it like some times in the first chapters 1-2 times near the chapters fifty something and that's it. It has been like more than 100+ chapters don't you think he should look in it or does it even matter overall? Cause what makes the mc different from others is that forbidden realm (which is not as rare as it seems cause apparently tons of others have it). The power of the mc is mediocre at best typical xianxia ones. At a place you are a king with that power at another just a typical commoner or even a servant. 100+ chapters and nothing to wait for and my question is....Might this be the prologue but i didn't know???/ And finally what with the title the paragon??? of destruction??? The mc is nothing no paragon no being of destruction he is slightly above average as if possible. If you like that xianxia thing feel free to read with those fights and dumb mc that get power from just 'cause author want it. Finally i am less frustrated. Peace :D
I came in to this book having a great expectations and I came out of this book thinking that the author needed to proof read cause what they got now has to be fixed . Ive read the first few chapters and i still think I have the right to say the author needs to fix the book . The author instead of having the mc tag along with the bronze knoght should have had him follow along with the girl and so he could grow along with the girl and get more powerful with her so that would be good character Development . Also the mc is so attached to the firl even though he hardly knows who she is He is idiotic and I hate it . I recommend Anyone who stumbles upon this review to not read the book this book looks good at first glance . But it turns into an absolute Dumspter fire later and if you think im just trash talking Go look at other reviews Its a 1/10 i recommend you to find a better novel instead Of this
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Wish there was more! So much more! This was a great book and I’m so happy for all the characters! I’m so glad that this book was written, as I needed it in my life.
This is a rather unique take on the litRPG genre and the characters are rather unique spectrums of everyday people put in a world where they have video game mechanics at their disposal. If you like really visceral, ***** content that's sometimes as dark as game of thrones and the walking dead but can inspire you with themes of friendship and redemption. This story is for you. I pull no punches in my subject matter and I wish for my audience to know I will not compromise the quality of my work. Enjoy!
The writing is bad ,the story is good,the wirkd background is good ,the other characters are good but the biggest **** is that he has some absolute resistance that gives him 1000% resistance and yet he has to be careful to fight a beowolf,also its been a long time since he has give and taker and semblance copy yet he did not copy ozpins and the others ability,I think its a waste of time and people feeling if you wanted to nerf your character dont fuking give him things that make him over powered,honestly the things that were added by the author into the story are **** because he gives pkwers and then nerfs them
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer.Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
I like the plot of the story and everything else but the release is really slow but except for that I like it because it’s cultivation and a game but at the same time it is in real life in his world
This book is decent, The grammatical errors look non-existent and the story is starting at a good pace, The starring is quite mysterious, U think The reader who likes to read some mystery and gaming novel they would love this novelHowever, there are fewer details about the surroundings and characters
Honestly, love the story so far. Mc is motivated by 1 goal, eternal life. Just like Lord Fang Yuan and Leylin from RI and WMW respectively. Also, I love the story so far.
This is hilarious. Not only is the translation quality terrible, but the author has meshed together the worst traits from Japanese protagonists (lack of ambition, and subservience) with Chinese protagonists - creating what can only be called an abomination. It's so bad that random spectators constantly gawk at the protagonist, not because he is amazing, but rather because he belongs in the zoo. As for the plot? What plot...read the title.
Hello there! author is this a rewrite cuz I have read the one before and it was good tell me if there will be romance because I don't see the tag anywhere. The last one was good and hope this one will be same and just so you know I have not read it yet after which I will comment on this review to update and hope the author reply. Habe a good day :)