Don’ have a opinion really, just pick it
The world background is frustrating and confusing. Readers will spend a lot of time wondering where the setting is (it’s not explained until pretty far into the story).The most frustrating thing about the story is the knock-offs of existing work. He releases The Halfling (The Hobbit) with Filbo Fabbins (Bilbo Baggins) as the main character. Every non-original song has the song title and lyrics altered in a way that’s disorienting and confusing. I guarantee you most of the readers googled the lyrics to see which song it is. It takes you out of the immersive experience. If you’re going to rip something off, you might as well be honest about it. I don’t know if the author is trying to avoid copyright strikes or whatever, but you can safely reference existing works as long as you properly cite it. Even using lyrics would be fine, it’s considered fair use.The language is stilted. You can tell the author speaks English as a second language. This is far from the worst story on Webnovel though. But…It often comes off as word salad. Especially the chapter titles (it looks like Mad Libs sometimes).The names of the MC and the supporting characters are awful - they’re not memorable in a literary sense. The other thing that bothers me is that this is a novel that requires payment. Given all of the problems with the story, I don’t think this rises to the level of a work requiring payment. I’m not trying to discourage the author. In fact, if he fixes what I suggested, I’d revise the rating to 4.5/5 stars. It’s an interesting premise and can be engaging.
many people including me , love this kind of story which the lead character usually the good ones were bullied, looked down at first but in the end those who mocked and looked down on him/her will be trampled competely. I love it keep up the good work!!! looking forward for more exciting stories.
No for me, for every one chapter on Marketing/Future products you get ten chapters on silly hijinks and shenanigans with family and friends from a high school boy. Maybe if i was much younger i would enjoy this. IMO misleading title.
I'm wishing for a good world background explanation but not too many details, can fill that in later on into the novel.Clean and ****** Realms. Easy to understand and follow.. Not too overbearing of a main character PLEASE. Awakening 3 lifetimes worth of memories and if he still acts like some young impulsive guy I swear.. Past 2 and current lifetime. 3 worlds. Many stuff to make up on. Many stuff to relate to. Many stuff to make something out of nothing. That's what I meant to say.
Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates. Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates. Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates. Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates. Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates. Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates. Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates.
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The story and the past is good and the development of the story is like a smooth water flow but have u thought that when the acloplyse started human laws will not crumble very fast and the mc behaves like when he is from the past because humanity will not crumble in a day at least it will take a week or so. In my opinion aurthor u have disturbed the flow of river when he trash talks those police officers because everyone has a self respect and will not bow down easily so that’s the very clear that u have messed the story Sorry for the harsh words and if u read it u can read some other authors writers work and u can gain some insight. I don’t know how u good reviews thought they didn’t even pointed out simple mistakes ?Even though it wasted my time typing I like your world background hence i thought I pointed these things if not readers will get disappointed and will leave the novel ?
Goalkeeper system or watching football system? read until chapter 14 and drop because author keep writing about MC watching football game only.
END IS HERE...oh I like that... author improved his grammar compared to his previous novel...and grammar mistakes are little to none. Nice starting, so far good. It's a type of novel which action mixed with lite gore(I am not of fan of it though). So far story is normal and no plottwists or something make it say wow. but it's nice novel. World background is same as modern so there's nothing to say but author writing about surroundings is good. Character development is nice and like that MC don't become douche bag after apocalypse started like mc in god and devil world. Hope that he won't become douchebag. Nice work author.
Is not worth it....... period .....
Since many people rate this novel badly for a stupid reason (slow pace, boring). I'll give 5 stars. Come on guys you read too much op nonsense novel. If you rate a novel 1 just because it is slow, then 90% of western novels are badThis novel is written by the same author of throne of magical arcana, which is currently my favorite CN. So I have my hopes high for this novel I'll change my rating later