Good luck with the future story building. Good luck with the future story building. Good luck with the future story building. Good luck with the future story building.
I’m a sucker for a good kingdom building novel, this one’s really good and the settings original as well. I hope to be able to see what happens next~ ??????????????
This story started really good, then the author left the MC Wolf behind and made the story all about the dwarf sidekick, there is no way I am paying to read anymore of this. ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Read the first 10 chapters. Really not much to say about the novel... Pretty bad all around and these days there are so many much better sign in novels (80 years sign in, buddha's palm, turquoise pond just to name a few) It feels really pointless to bother with this.TQ - goodStory development - seems to be going in the direction of a harem which I personally don't like because most of the time it kind of consumes the other parts of the plot, which does indeed seem to happen here as well.Character design - There just aren't that many meaningful interactions between the characters. That part where he sneaked into the empress dowager's bedroom and ended up as her lover is odd at best, MC's main characteristic is lustful.World background - seems to be a somewhat normal cultivation world although not really. Most of these kinds of settings in other novels depict sects as overlords that reign over kingdoms and empires but here it seems to be somewhat different. In the first place, why would a sect want to conquer a kingdom? MC gets all kinds of sutras and techniques which sound cool but don't really seem necessary in relation to anything that's going on atm?... The cultivation system is super scuffed, nothing else notable.TL:DR - plenty of other novels that do the same job, 100 times better. Wouldn't recommend.
Easy , easy. Don't let your hormones take over just because of the cover , even if you can't , can't blame you , I did get my hormones triggered but I'm still sane enough to not use this novel as fap material , yes , it's that good. Your wondering why I'm proclaiming using this as fap material you say , well in my honest opinion , read it and you will see.
This author deliberately slows the pace and makes you read the same scene twice over from 2 different perspectives to pad the word count. This could be a gem but the author is obviously experience at squeezing as much.money out of people as possible. I recommend pirating it or just not reading it or anything else by this author.
Only read 10 chapters.Story involved a highschooler that transmigated into a pokemon-esque world where almost everyone has pets. Story development just feel okay to me, MC owned a pet, used the cheat, goes to adventure, get new pet, uses cheat etc. Very big downside to me is the translation quality. It seems separate people independently translates and edits each chapter as no consistent use of terms was established.
What an Amazing piece of Art. With your story I fell deeply in love with Webnovel. Thanks and more power to your elbow author. Hope you will continue to provide us with more Amazing story I the future
One of the first novels ive ever read loved it until the author gave up and torpedoed it. Before you start reading, ask your self will you be satisfied never knowing the ending because at this point i doubt this guy will ever finish the novel!
It's a funny and light read. It's an interesting story and would be great if the mc wasn't dumb af... I mean his first technique the FOUNDATION breathing technique. He never even thinks to level it up and only levels up auxiliary passives. It's a joke rly and just so fcking frustrating to read. I could understand why he only levelled up his strengthen passive first even if it was annoying you understand because of the comp. However, after that was over and him having tons of points from it, the first thing he should have done is strengthen his foundation.... It's just so fcking frustrating to read So yeah...
I think the author should change the cover of his story, it doesn't look very good, I think with the genres of this story you can find "much better"))
I love this book, the fiction portrayed is absolutely amazing, I like the way the characters are depicted, I definitely recommend this book, the author has done a great job with this story