A very good book, I read all the chapters at once.Hope there will be more soon...........................................................
In my opinion the mc is a push over. Xpxpxpxp
Loved it lol. Wish it was 50-100 chapters more since I would have liked to see more of both worlds from reylins perspective. Story did feel just a bit too fast for me but still great time all in all
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Well! The title of the book got me in the first place and when I started to read it I got really excited and hooked. I am ?percent sure you guys will love it ??????
Short Review :- If you are thinking whether to read this novel or not, my simple answer will be, yes. You should definitely read this webnovel, although this novel has many flaws and is inconsistent in many departments but when it comes to story and character department this novel might be the best available on this website. But I must warn you, grammar and spelling are worst possible. I will recommend you read this after reading some of other xianxia (Chinese cultivation novels) novels. Some recommendations are Renegade Immortal, I shall seal the heavens, Revered Insanity, etc. After reading some of the xianxia novels, you will find this more entertaining, different and good. Long Review :-Goods:-1. Story :- This has one of the most fast paced story lines. Story is good but is very inconsistent, some events are shown very slowly, where they almost become boring and some are shown very quickly where we expected it to be explored some more. Although this is not a deal breaker and we can still enjoy the novel but its just something that author can improve on.2. Characters :- Characters are very well written, every character is 3 dimensional with different personalities, motives, goals and backstories. Main Character is one of the best, he is neither a goody-2-shoes nor downright psychopath, he is gray.3. Plot Holes :- Almost none.4. Fights :- Well written and choreographed. Short and sweet.5. Concept :- Different from norm and well executed.6. Very addictive and hard to put down, it retains our attention through its fast paced story, interesting plot, good character interactions, some mysteries and other good aspects instead of cliffhangers.Bads :-1. Grammar and spelling:- Only thing I hate about this novel. It is just bad no arguments. I myself am not a native English speaker but the mistakes are just hard to swallow. They can easily be correct with autocorrect or grammerly or a editor. Initially I was not having that much issues with it because atleast the story was understandble but further down the story where things become complicated, I was not understanding the story itself. Please author I beg of you do something about it.2. Too much info dump during the history lessons regarding previous Great Emperor. And too many Great Emperors. Doesn't bother me that much but mentioning it regardless.Thank You Author LazySageDao for this amazing story, and keep it up. I may not be able to send you gifts but I have bought everyone of your chapters till the latest and will continue to. As to thank you for giving me a chance to experience this story I will try my best to recommend other people to read your novel via online and offline. I have never wrote a review before and might bever write after this but I took this opportunity because I was genuinely satisfied by your story and wanted to tell other peoples about its goods and bads as well as tell the author to do something about his writing mistakes. If I have written something wrongly, please forgive me as I am new to this.
This is a story unlike any other you have seen. Biako does what most other authors need a whole chapter to do in a single page THE FIRST PAGE. Just read it. The pacing is fast and exciting, The world building creative and especially the main character is AMAZING. It actually shows what view a real reincarnated person will have in a cultivation world. Logical, Creative and best of all? This character isn't some random heroic face slapping protagonist with plot armor, who makes "mistakes" due to being young and foolish despite living his second life.
Good story with proper character development and characters with feeling and not meaningless face slapping. A story with emotions that will make laugh and cry . You will grow together with the lead and will be able to feel his ambitions and drive. Every movie till has a meaning and not just for making money but justified on grounds of development of mc as the best director.
it's free right now but I am still not reading I read the first chapter and then I was bored it's not a idiotic MC butter truly idiotic MC I am not in this set goodbye beaches
One of the best stories in qidian. It has an amazing plot and you can't guess what happens next or if she'll succumb to the darkness or what. It keeps your curiosity piqued. It's a must read for readers who are tired of the overly used stereotypical stories in qidian.
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heyyyyyyyy mannnnn is this story good........haven't read it yet..