What a unique concept this novel is hope there’s no romance
It has been a while since i wrote something and i hope i'll get some feedback to improve my writing. This story is something i wrote after reading a pretty large number of xianxia novel, i always hated the way those mcs go around collecting females like Pokemon and swinging their swords like retards at the first person who opens their mouth, creating a bigger problem and an enmity with a clan/sect, then repeats the same thing after 20 chapters.So yeah i'll be avoiding that.
Not a bad start, interesting premise. Looking forward to more chapters. I like the idea that he transmigrated through time rather than through dimensions. He is reborn in the same world, just millennia earlier.
even if u start changing the story at chapter 100 there is still 100 chapters that completely copied from the original no one is gonna w8 for u to copy and paste 100 chapters till u decide to change the story
I m waiting for updates...............................................................................................................................
This novel just like the others I have read are nice but I would love it if the chapters aren't locked because it kills my zeal to want to read on and it is very frustrating.
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Translation Quality top notch, Story development awesome, character design perfect, updating stability good and world background nice. Dear author, translator and all who took part in this book, the sky is never the limit. Proud of ya'll
i read this while offline cause i forgot to, i hate this minimum 140 character ****................................................................................. anyways very good novel
Make sure you are better and don't risk your health over a few chapters and make sure to make many instead. even if we have to WAIT! Your story are progressing in a direktion that make me believe the story! I live the life of the character when I read the story!
From an objective standpoint, this is a pretty good novel. MC is a transmigrator who put all of his talent into strength, so he has the abIlity to go strong. Only issue would be the ever present Chinese nationalism. It's not too much, but annoying.From an personal point of view I'm disappointed. *spoiler from having read raws up to chapter 71*I thought that this would become a novel where the MC doesn't trust the military and slowly gets power and manages to slowly unravel the mysteries in his brother's death. Instead, he casually walks into the military base and with the help of his teacher and other military members, he manages to get a copy of the recordings of his brother's death. He finds out what's wrong in one night and then hands the data he found out back to the higher ups in the military.
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