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The story is engaging, featuring familiar tropes such as transmigration, hunting, and an Overpowered Protagonist pair. The protagonist exhibits the selflessness common in hunter narratives, while the male lead is the typical S-ranker with an obsessive and rude demeanor, showing kindness only to the protagonist. Supporting characters add depth, with Apollo/Appa/Dad-pollo being a standout.
However, there were aspects that fell short for me. A crucial character, the ML's younger brother, lacked development and was essentially a missed opportunity for character growth. The revelation of the MC's connection to the parallel world felt rushed, and the god "Destruction" was inadequately explained. The main antagonist appeared unexpectedly without proper foreshadowing, leaving room for neither attachment nor dislike. Some plot devices, like the MC's healing and OP skills, were underutilized. The significance of the MC's attire, hinted at in the cover, was left unexplored. The corruption of the MC's soul by a minor villain was introduced and then seemingly abandoned. The resolution of the corrupted constellations and the friendly ones was left open-ended. Lastly, the ending felt somewhat平淡, despite the story's potential.
Overall, it's a decent, easy read, but readers shouldn't anticipate extensive detail due to its relatively shorter length compared to the narrative scope. The story could have benefited from more chapters to fully explore its concepts and arcs.
This intriguing novel, "Awakening the Gluttony Talent," captivates with its unique premise. The protagonist's journey of strength through culinary prowess is both refreshing and unexpectedly hilarious. The plot weaves a delightful blend of adventure, self-discovery, and the unexpected power of food. It's not just about the gastronomy; it's a heartwarming tale of overcoming obstacles and personal growth. A must-read for those who crave unconventional storytelling and a touch of whimsy in their literary escapades.
Got boring around chapter 600
This is mtled i wouldnt read it. It’s practically another language.
Ey I actually already read this on a different site a few years ago but I remember it being good. I think I liked it, a lot of crying too and the ending felt good for me personally.
Hope there will be an update soon
So they are at least as sweet as in the manhwa, good to know
This book is a total chapter drought! I'm seriously dehydrated from all this chapter-less content. Give me more chapters or give me death!?️????????????
The 3rd person is very prominent and makes this extremely difficult to read. Basically every line starts with the characters name and then proceeds to explain what that character does or says. It is almost similar to reading a script. The grammar is also just generally not great, though that can be improved. My main critisizism is the way the story is told to you instead of you experiencing. It's like this character did this and said that and felt that way. The writing should express that, but leave some room for interpretation instead of being so closed. Hope my ramblings make some sense, this is intended to be constrcutive not cruel.
hey when are you updating new chapters of memorial of returnees?
Add more chapters. To eliminate curiosity
I Love this author, and this book is exceptional!
