It’s a nice book but Luna gets dumber and dumber every chapter. She’s not bright at all and she pisses me off.. how dumb can she be.
Love that Cole & Joan finally can be together to show each other how they feel.
it a very great book but wish the author can write more than 2 chapter per day
good book, wish more chapters were released
Love this book
Scamming author. Repeating the same nonsense over and over again.
till 450 he doesn't know about triplets
Okay so let me just say this first—Ava Taylor is honestly one of the most interesting characters I've come across in sports fiction, and she barely says two words in this entire chapter. Howard Webb notices her. Ferguson notices her. The narrative notices her. And that's the point. She's seventeen, about to turn eighteen, and already officiating FA Cup matches against Premier League teams. Her line—"I plan to officiate Championship matches within two years and move up to the Premier League in my third year"—hit me like a truck. That's not a kid talking. That's someone who has already mapped out her entire life and is executing it with surgical precision. What I love is how her relationship with Webb plays out. He's not just a mentor figure—he's genuinely impressed, maybe even a little envious. "He simply felt that it had taken him 14 years to finally stand on the Premier League stage... which made him feel slightly envious." That single line tells us everything about Webb's own journey and how he sees Ava as both a protégé and a mirror of what he once wanted to be. Their conversation in the tunnel is quiet, professional, but underneath there's this whole unspoken layer of respect and generational passing. And then there's Ronaldo. Just one mention—"At just 20 years old, with dark curly hair, a long-sleeved red shirt, and a position in the air that was half a body higher than everyone else"—and suddenly this kid on the pitch becomes a character too. The fact that Ava tracks his movement so closely, that she's the one making the offside call, creates this weird invisible thread between them. She's watching him the way he's watching the game. Two competitors on opposite sides of the same line. The Burton players themselves are painted in broad strokes but they work—Rahad's energy, Diney's last-minute save, Shaw's header blocked on the line. They're the underdogs and the text never lets you forget it. But Ava? She's the real protagonist here, and I'm already obsessed with where her story is going.
should have left full story up on inkit. this is asking people to spend way more $$ than what youd pay for a book at an actual physical bookstore. I feel like we're getting robbed.
So far it’s pretty good . just a lot of the names are hard to pronounce .
Too much unnecessary drama
very good story