It's a nice story with an intriguing plot.I love how it's written and executed.I do recommend people reading itGood job author??????????????
it's a decent story with a decent premise. nothing revolutionary here but it works for me. my only complaint is everything that has happened feels like it should of happened in like a third of the chapters alot of it is overly descriptive it's ok to world build and talk but to much is also a demerit as well. fanfic level preety much. webnovel going downwards on the books they partner with lately tbh.
love the story, has some interesting parts, overall it's a good story though I'll read this later cuz in my free time
Honestly loving it so Would love if you went into the background of the world. Or universe…
This is a good book. The writer put quite good effort writing this.
Its's my book so... obviously five stars. But honestly it's worth such a rating.If you love sports and a little pinch of emotional rollercoaster, then this is what you need.No Cheats! Just pure talent and hard work.All in all, i think it's a book you'll enjoy reading. So add to your Library and lets go on a wonderful adventure through the world of football.
This novel's good, I miss these types of novel that even if the mc's slacking off, he can also try working hard to gain more. This also have a similarity with shadow hacks but overall it's good and well-written.Don't drop this novel, I'll support it with my power stone on daily basis.
Amazing story so far just a bit confused with his abilities are what level they are.try to write an auxiliary on the ignisis abilities.cant say much about the world background but it's only the start.And if your having writers block just read novels or manga that revolve around animal or best evolution.keep up the good work.
Giving an average grade since the plot and character's feel like a replica of every genderbend fantasy novel. The meek fem mc and the aggressive love interests... I'm open to different smut novels but I've never been fond of beta mcs.
Hello, it's Steel here and it's my debut harem novel. Please if you have any questions or complaints, drop them here and I'm sure to respond to them. These are the additional tags:Yuri - NoNTR - Yes (the Mothers are wives of Eros so yeah)Cultivation - YesNetorare - NoAntihero - YesCunning MC - YesThe novel follows Aeric who is reborn in a fantasy world were romance, desire and powers are entwined. He enters the world with the Celestial Depravity System with is basically a cheat code that gives him a unique Class and Skill, with the Skill, he can claim the abilities of women by inseminating them with his royal seed. But shooting your load into a woman has proven to cause more problems than it has solved, and that also remains the case for Aeric in the world of Erothyria.
So good, I love how greatly detailed the world building is. Furthermore, the portrayal of multiple character perspectives throughout the storyline is so fun to read. It’s unique and I have not read many webnovels that do this and show different characters’ side of the story and not just the main character’s.
The story was initially interesting, but it literally goes in a circle for at least 10-15 chapters with no real development. Then it skips weeks to months ahead with no background. There is no crucial plot just a story that continues to circle around and around. I wasted coins on this story.