I really like it even if sometimes it got confusing . . .BUT ... Atleast for gamers and reader who love reading the same genres.. hope to recommend it ! !!!
Es una excelente historia me cautivó desde el principio.Espero que la sigan publicando y no la dejen abandonada como muchas otras obras eso sería una lastima
When I first started reading I was so confused. But as I slowly read more and more I fell in love with the books it’ so good. There’s so many twists and turns in the book. It really plays with your emotion at one point you can feel you heart beating because or Layla and Zane and then you actually feel scared because of the events. Overall this book and author deserves more attention
I actually love the premise of the story, and the concept you used for Qi is also a unique one; especially when used in gaming :). I would love to continue reading this story and also get inspiration from you while I am writing my own xD. Lob you, author <3
Well, Author by the way is maybe a beginner, since you simply accelerated things a lot, there was no development of love and feelings between the characters they just decided to 'date' out of nowhere but apart from that the story has great potential for development, thank you .
UPDATE DECEMBER 2, 2021:I have written a summary for Chapters 1 - 37. It's very short and should spare you from the bad chapters I had written in the past.I know I should've done this sooner, but I really hate rewriting. It's very mentally taxing to that point that I get lazy.Before 2022, I aim to finish rewriting all of those chapters for a brand new start for my novel, and I hope all of you gain a maid fetish after reading my novel. Thank you! Spread maid love to the world!!
very very slow development of the story and always writing unnecessary and very unimportant things for the story itself ............................. ................,....,............
Finally got updated letsss gooooooooo
Imma need some more chapters here author… u can’t just leave it off like that bro
Ummmmm....So, Sanidhya GoswamiI look upon you as somewhat of a dignified person(only in terms of your writing, warna I know tu kitna bade wala hai)Keep going? you're gonna rock the world with your stories:Best wishes,From:Zo
I was searching for cultivation novels, and stumbled upon this story. Seeing it was written by someone who had already written two great novels I gave it a chance( after reading the tags). Within the other story’s there a background given at the start, Meant to help readers understand the back story. The same was done here i just their wasn’t an in-depth explanation.(although I hope the author will go in depth at a later point in time) Moving onto character design I feel that for someone who is supposed to have “lived” for billions of years, he would know how the world of this story works and be a less trusting person I understand the slave girl but he keeps helping people randomly through the story. There are other times when he shows a personality befitting of his age like when he try’s to scam the guild, but at other times he shows a nieave personality like helping characters who are not really needed to progress the story. Although I feel the author will eventually put him in situations where these characters will be useful, their is currently no use to them other than saying his resources which could be used to further his character as a whole.
Hi author, I just found this story now and I love it alot only to find out u didn't complete it and haven't even updated in a year ... Please let me know if there's gonna be any updates or if you've migrated to another website. Please author ???