I was searching for cultivation novels, and stumbled upon this story. Seeing it was written by someone who had already written two great novels I gave it a chance( after reading the tags). Within the other story’s there a background given at the start, Meant to help readers understand the back story. The same was done here i just their wasn’t an in-depth explanation.(although I hope the author will go in depth at a later point in time) Moving onto character design I feel that for someone who is supposed to have “lived” for billions of years, he would know how the world of this story works and be a less trusting person I understand the slave girl but he keeps helping people randomly through the story. There are other times when he shows a personality befitting of his age like when he try’s to scam the guild, but at other times he shows a nieave personality like helping characters who are not really needed to progress the story. Although I feel the author will eventually put him in situations where these characters will be useful, their is currently no use to them other than saying his resources which could be used to further his character as a whole.
