I really liked how it started, not knowing where she is even though she doesn't know either is very interesting, you can imagine every moment that passes while you are reading.
Wow really wow literally i enjoy your choice of words it make it look more mature and well thought the strory line is very goodupdate your book
I love this novel ? how many chapters this novel till the end? And can you please recommend me another nba novel that is like this. Better translation and grammar apologies for my poor English
Going great……entertaining reads with relatable characters and fast-paced plots.
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My first novel on this platform :d, it's good!
Interesting story, I highly recommend giving it a try
shameless auther review here! I am having a lot of fun in writing this book, if you stop by to read it, leave me a comment or review
This novel is one to keep, because the plot is very structured and prepared. The development of the book isn't all over the place but it's in one conga line, and that helps keep the reader interested.
The story is actually very good. It’s a humorous take on ‘cringey’ self-insert OCs you’d make up as kids with OP powers and skills. The main character’s horror at his own ‘cringey’ behavior and his constant internal dialogue really ties it together in a way that’s fun and kinda new. The world builing is really intricate and nice too.However THIS version of the novel unreadable. At first I noticed the lack of apostrophes and was like “no big deal, I can infer the proper words no issue” but then I realized that along with apostrophes there were absolutely no QUOTATION MARKS TO DENOTE DIALOGUE.There are so many lines you can’t distinguish from narration, inner dialogue, and spoken due to the casual tone of the novel making it basically impossible to read without giving yourself a headache.Really a shame, I had originally read over 200+ chapters of this story and was looking forward to finally reading the ending.
i love fantasy and i am glad that this novel did great in the story telling with a captivating first chapter with its vividly described fantasy setting. dear author, although as you say it is your first book, it seems that you are already so good at attracting readers with your novel. best of luck and keep writing ?
the novel has great potential and hope author will potray our history in a fun way.And delighted to see a fellow nepali on this community