The english is readable but there is still a big room for imptovement. New world as far as it seems so gotta see how it develops but it seems based on a cultivation background.To the characters weeell... mcs IQ is probably below the roomtemperatur in an arctic enviroment ? lets leave it with that statement
Great start, I like these type of novels, its seems that, I will have a new favorit story to read , that has a great story line with ?, waiting the upcoming chapters
This entire novel is basically my life; my spirit animal made manifest. There's nothing more real than reading a story about the writers and ****posting on discord.
One of the best written books I've read on this app so far. The synopsis is interesting. the story is written very well. I loved the way it develops through the chapters. A great piece of work by author!
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Shameless? Hahahaha I imagine Ye Qiu living in a magical world in real life. And assuming hi Battle Mage Status and fights multiple guilds and using shameless tactics to beat his opponents
Actually a very good read it has the standard cliches but it puts a twist on it by having an MC that warps expectations. Unlike other stories with a Ancient being reincarnated into a mortal this MC doesn't loose his attitude of a sovereign and makes for some funny af interactions. I had some serious Battle Frenzy ptsd moments at first but as the story carried on it really set itself apart. Yeah there is still the filler tropes that are setups for face smacking but its hilarious.The main female lead is fucking adorable and has so much character you can't say her personality is lacking hell she brings the MC up and that's hard to do as a side character
It is funny how i am yet to read this book. Hopefully it is lovely, love it cover as well, and i would love to start now ...so thanks for the chapters...???
Hey, not a bad tale! From the first chapter to the last chapter it's clear you're getting much, much better! I think to make it flow smoother you just need to improve your grammar and sentence variation. Other than that, keep writing everyday, and learn from the best authors you can find. Try and spot the differences between their work, and your own, and bridge the gap, bro.Keep it up~~~
Decent story but infrequent updates really hurts credibility and you will probably not finish the story in this lifetime..........................................................................
I have currently read up to chapter 276. Is this worth reading? Yes. However, do understand that the face slapping stops after about 50-70+ chapters. It seems the Author learned that the readers don't like non stop face slapping. It gets much better after getting past that section of the story.
With such a huge break, you ****ers better do a mass release of new chapters when the vote finally goes through, been waiting to see how XY recovers from the poison for half a year!