Abyss
This is the same story, is it? but it seems the story had a better plot now since you add some stories with the opening since I see the two of the previous novels are so barren in concept and motives.
But please continue, the cover is awesome and the story seems to get more legit.
Props for you author.
A weeb wakes up in his new life and in a new place he had never been before as Joshua, but why would he be here? Looks like we will journey with him and learn what he is capable of as it continues. Looks like he is also not sure how he died or how he got there, this is an interesting twist in storytelling that got my interest already. I already like this story xD
Book is pretty good. The main character has no personality tho. And his moms a fat pig. But his dad ate her and then buried her bones in Egypt.
Goody story, slow development of some characters and kind of feels that author left out some characters. But its only been 10 or so days in the world so far. I'm expecting author to give every important characters some SCREEN TIME too. I recommend this to anyone who are interested in a modern novel, with system and a sect based one at that.
would be a 5 star but has harem tag .
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so far, so good! I first got hooked on reading when I discovered martial god asura, since then I've read hundreds of similar eastern fantasy novels. glad to say this one not only has the potential to be one of the better ones but, from what I've seen, is already one of the better ones.
Loved this Story so far Does anyone know the RAW title for this novel??...........................................................................................
I would have expected this of a Japanese protagonist, never a Chinese protagonist.Here we have a White-Knight (incarnation of all that is righteous and heroic in the world) MC, who will make stupid decisions, and instead of being punished for it - he will instead be rewarded by the dullard of an author. Not once, or twice, but throughout the entire novel. Somethings shouldn't ever see the light of day. This novel is one of them.
A Gem, i would place this novel with Lord of mysterious simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there characterIm very happy that a new original has found its way to the topProsPotential for the story to go anywhere
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This is a great read! MC doesn't get sent back to the past once, but twice, which makes seeing him adapting to this situation really interesting. I like the world building. Would like to see a faster pace in these types of 'vr novels', would not like a read multiple chapters of grinding. The dialogue could be better written as well. All in all, would recommend! Happy reading!
