The opening of the first chapter is engaging and draws the reader into the story with its action-packed scene and mysterious character introductions. The use of descriptive language adds depth and vividness to the scene, making it easy for the reader to imagine the setting and characters.
I would encourage the author to continue building upon the strong foundation they've established in this opening chapter. Keep exploring the characters, their motivations, and their backstories to create a fully realized world that readers can immerse themselves in. Make sure to balance action with character development and build tension throughout the story to keep readers invested in the outcome. Keep up the good work!
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okay this book is really good it has so many things going for it I would like to see more chapters
I love this novel. The author's type of writing this, really amazed me. Good job!
I have read a good amount of dragon novels but I have to say that this is one of if not my most favorite dragon mc novel! I wish you luck as you make this novel and have it become popular while I will constantly read and keep up with it and give power stones as well!
It getting more and more boring as the story goes on.It's not that the plot idea is not good it's just the the plot with this Mc is trash.
pretty solid novel, some people bash it for the fact that the "bad luck" part of the novel is all heaven's fault, and yes it is, but that's part of the novel. it isn't some random bs that he just blames it out of nowhere, it's part of the main characters "gravis" background. it's something his entire family has to deal with, not just him, so I see it as just another element of the story that adds something else to make it less boring. This story isn't repetitive either, it's not just "go to new place, make someone mad, get their family/master involved, then whole sect, destroy sect, go to new area, repeat" when the enemy is the world itself, instead of trouble popping up randomly, it's instead finding allies and friends that is random since the mc has to assume the world is against him.overall, this novel has some pretty good development and story elements to it and takes a very different approach to cultivation compared to other novels, and is worth the time to read it.
I'm really not a good explainer but I'll say that i trust in imbreak and am sure this will turn out to be nice if not awsome. so do give it a try. I've read his previous FF's and they're all super, so yeah....
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I don't know why people even do this anymore. You can't have the tags "anime" and "mech" in a cultivation novel. They do not belong together and if I see a novel with them in the tags, you're instantly getting a 1 star review.
Why its novel out from vote pool ?
Wise Lizard boy gets beat up 10/10 Well written, fun story
Honest review so far.... AWESOME, the MC is likeable and if the story follows the tradition of the other novel by the same author then the girls will have each their unique traits and personalities making a good harem, the system is well explained (and Evangeline is a good adition to it), there is a loot of room for future plot and development so i can see we will have this novel for a long time.