The first part had alot of descriptions, but aside from that its all good, The world is variedThe characters are goodAnd the mc is, not sure at the moment, but ill add when i do.
Have a great world building and amazing characters. I just started this book out of boredom but man this did gave a shock with a very good plot. Till chapter 260 the book has been great and would love to read more. some words to the author1- if you can then please increase the updates, make them atleast 4-5 per week cause. 2- An advice to not make the harem too big it will really ruin the story as this book have a very high potential. Would love to read more of this book.
Haven't read it yet but 5 stars'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
This is an okay novel. If you like novels with cheats, an OP MC, and obstacles can be overcome in the next paragraph this novel is for you. Personally, I found this novel boring to read and really struggled to get through the early chapters.
Hmm, how should I say i don't know but why i mean why you make his mother her soul mate . It's kind of okay but not that much but again conversations are awkward and why his mother's olmost every sentence end with ❤️?
I went back and fixed the first chapters. My writing has improved compared to before. I use grammerly so there isn't spelling mistakes but I might still have some. I release chapter's Friday and Saturdays now sometimes Sunday. I hope you all like the story try it out and I would really appreciate you all reviewing my novel.
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I love this story you always leave me with more desire to continue reading it.
Good story and good sex.
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Please released... please pick this one....
Let me tell you how much fun this story is! It's entertaining! Excited to read more~
I've heard of numerous cultivation stories, but this one has its uniqueness that creates an entertaining tale. The first chapter got me hooked! It has vivid story telling!
This is a diamond! A bit in the rough, but definitely has its merits! :D
This is the beginning of something amazing! The characters are relatable and the story is progressing wonderfully. Would recommend this to everyone!
Well I'm the author, so I have to give it 5 stars, but here are some reasons why you should as well.1. You like face slapping? There will be plenty of that!2. You like dark comedy? This novel's dark enough that I can't even see the light switch in front of me.3. You like cultivation? Well join an adventure where each step will be a slow climb.4. You like systems? I got all the system you can want, you'll seriously get sick of it.If that didn't convince you, then maybe this will, cute girls...