Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
It started off interesting but turns into a strange collection of anime references. The world building is OK. I'm still reading(chapter 21) but it's really hard to push myself to go further.
eww~ depicts the characters of Chinese people, they oppressed and threatened their own people to get what they want, yuck~ so this how Chinese government acts, shame on you. A bunch of old men tricking a seventeen year old boy to get the inventions he hold? After I read this my impression of china has go down to drain, boooo!!!
Hi! I’m still waiting for your reply. If your are interested in our international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *) for more details.
Skip the synopsis. Just to let you know that ginseng has seeds. In Brazil we produce a seed that is developed in large quantities for negligible values. Asia consumes them at a great price for a mixture of pseudoscience (they believe the natural mountain version is medically miraculous). While nowadays it is easily cultivable (economically not worth it). Anyway, try to get vaccinated.
i hope this will get pucked........ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .. . . .. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Excellent work! I hope this book would bear fruit to you, author! And I hope your readers would love it!
Writing quality for me it's around 4/5 (but I am generous right now so 5) There are multiple things I'd like to point out such as passive voice misuse, filter words, showing techniques, and some words that you need to delete. This include:
*boring life (you need show the scene that would say that the MC has a boring life instead of telling it
*no friends- the same goes to this one
*was full of- passive voice misuse
*he saw- filter words
*he began to read- delaying the sentence
*was sleeping-passive voice misuse
Claude the cultivator............ could mkae a jp name but too lazy to make a cn name eh? Not hard to pluck a name off this site but you dont bother
AUTHOR!!! THANK YOU FOR STARTING TO WRITE AGAIN:: I really LOVE this book of yours and I was saddened when you stopped writing
Raw ?
[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
really liked the idea of the story and the whole background of the world the story is set in and the updates are regular
author should come continue to update as such and any way thanks for another wonderful story on this platform
Good in the start but now after NTR no thanks ... I hope you Rewriting because you writing is good it feel bad you take bad reviews when you are good writier