A novel with a very good idea, but in my opinion, the author destroyed with so many of the three (racism/nationalism/patriotism) So anything that smacks of one of the three will be removed, oh and anything that seems stupid to me and doesn't add anything to the story as well.
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Buena historia, me gusta me el sistema y su funcionamiento...............,..................................,............................................................................Todos estos puntos son porque debo de poner la cantidad mínima de ciento cuarenta caracteres
**Please read until the end of volume one until you decide whether to drop or not! If you can’t tolerate the drama, you will be missing out. Zombie and Cranberry’s relationship is SO MUCH better. I have privilege and I’ve bought all the chapters so far, I would know. Honestly, their dynamic relationship is my favorite part about the story!**It honestly makes me sad to see that people drop this novel after the 6th chapter. The villainess, or Cranberry, and Zombie are around SEVEN years old 6 chapters in. However, she DOES NOT act like a normal child does. Some people also missed the fact that she seems AFRAID of what her mother will do to her when she was beating Zombie. Why? It is revealed at the END of volume ONE. Trust me, you will NOT hate Cranberry. In fact, there is a character you will hate more! Writing quality: [5/5] It’s good so far. Some typos here and there, but nothing major. Would’ve put 4.5/5, but I can’t do a half star.Updating stability: [5/5] We’re given 2 chapters a day at 5AM and 5PM PST if nothing happens to the author. 2 a day is plenty alreadyStory development: [5/5] IMO, the story is amazing. I love the direction the author is taking it and I’m hooked!Character design: [5/5] I love Zombie and Cranberry’s character and I love their development. The characters are lifelike, but their common sense is obviously different from ours because their world is different.World background: [3/5] We don’t really know a lot about the world because of Zombie’s rotten brain skill. This means that we can only learn from whatever information Cranberry gives us, if she ever does. In addition, we haven’t started the “otome game” setting yet. I’ll update this when we get there.If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
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Another generic system novel. Moronic MC that hides his abilities and plot only moves to faceslap bullies. Writing quality is merely ok. With chapters locking in the 30s, it’s better to just move on.
Very good progress so far ............,....................................................
Dude who puts deicide in the summary. I legit thought the people who wrote the summary misspelled ‘decide’ and wondered why people would use this word instead of ‘God killing’ blade....
Yo author here??, as it is tradition, I have come to review my book on an honest basis I really like this one, hope you do too and leave a review. Your thoughts are appreciated.??
this story is going great.i am always waiting for new chapters. new writer new content. presentation style is also different than others??
This story was great the plot and it's characters. And for me, I really like it so I recommend it to others to read. I'm not being bias, it just get to my heart. I wish you will give us some wonderful work. Thank you!!! I love it. Fantastic and magnificent, your story is the best. Even though that I like more on action story with the touch of fantasy, I really like your story. But to think that I will fell in love in this story was unbelievable also I really like it thank so much.
I never doubt that this book is not good coz it's so perfect for my taste! The author is really born talented! Though, I'm a stranger, I am proud of the author's success. I hope for this book to be on top and be popular among books all over the world! Fighting! ❤❤