JamesRichard9158
It was.. meh..
Thanks, wondering if I should still pick this up. Guess I'll just keep it in the Library for now.
This comment is lame. No ones perfect and even pros die. You want someone with plot armor that thick there are plenty of other novels on here like that. I think it's a nice change or pace that the MC isnt just a god because.
What's the story here...Did y'all drop it
Wait... Incomplete stories here .....
This is fun to read. But the translation kinda mess up him/her and she/he sometimes are wrong. And some the words (i don't know if it was meant that way or they just use different word when translating) are confusing. Like monks =cultivatorsBreathe = auraDignified = seriousAnd much more. But if you can look past that it's fun to read.
My love for this novel grows in each chapter ❤️ each chapter leaves me in suspense and the next satisfies and drops me in another
This book has a terrible story line. It is just the normal rich billionaire meets struggling model and rescues her from all her enemies. I do not recommend this book to any reasonable person, it is a waste of data.
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Names change all the time, translation inconsistent af. The world is every vrmmo cliche imaginable and the game lore is pretty much just world of warcraft. Pretty terrible
Broooo...honestly the first 2 chapters get u hooked
The premise was pretty interesting. The story was definitely enough to get me hooked and wanting more. However, the writing was simply atrocious. I have no idea if it's a translation issue or the author is ESL and is still learning English. Having an editor would help this novel a lot. Or perhaps even some kind of writing assistant to check for grammar and spelling.
