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Wow I really appreciate author fir producing such a gem!the book is in first person narrative, full of mysterious atmosphere. I felt so drawn to the chapters without even realising hehe. The world building is great and the characters are crafted finely.good job author
I'm sorry to say but the translation is questionable at best, the story is very mainstream and rather boring...and I just made it through a few chapters until I decided to protect my sanity and drop it. So many stupid moments that you can't even blame on the translation."My pet grows when it eats electricity. So I will feed it wires!" - no, not plugged in. just...wires. Because obviously electricity magically manifests it wires.Just... don't. A Pokemon Fanfic is probably more sensible, at least that needs no questionable worldbuilding...
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Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
The start of the story may be off putting to some people but the development is good. you gotta keep on reading if you wanna get to the good parts that'll keep you hooked.
Good Story, overpowered protagonist, nice-nice-nice. The explanation in the chapter's is also flawless, some chapter we're even filled by just explanations.Please Improve Your Conversations ?
I can see that Bai Li is going to be the FL wifey. they would be so adorable together I cannot wait to see if there is going to be romance between the two of them
Hello, Author here i'm giving myself a pretty average rating since i'm new to writing, and that i'm rather forgetful and may need to change a few things, but overtime i'll improve!
Very nice plot alot of senerios resembling real life power stuggles and a lot more
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The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.