Great novel bro..Good work I love mc character development ..it feels realistic .anyway waiting for new chapters
Till chapter 21 BEST literally BEST.
Good writing quality and almost no mistake.
This novel actually is focusing on kingdom building
Random fan review here, just wanna say that This is such an awesome fantasy read. The author did such an excellent job with the whole world creation. I love the side characters as lol there so lovable! I’m so in love with this book I had to give it a solid five stars!!!
Its good enough for me I guess. There is no major mistake and it is easily readable and understandable.I gave 5 stars to motivate you to continue
A very good novel if your like me and like copy novels.NEEDS MORE UPDATES
There's really nothing negative I can say about this story. Beautifully written, strong and distinct characters, and a very intriguing premise that will keep the reader glued to the screen to find out more about what is going on. The dialogue is great and the splashes of Italian make it all the more authentic. I also think the cutting backwards and forwards in time and telling the story in non-linear fashion was an excellent technique to draw the reader in. I will be sure to keep reading on further in this one. The protagonist is a really well-developed character. He is one who has come from a poor family and I look forward to finding out how he has ended up rich and powerful pretending to be a man who we find out was murdered in front of him and has been communicating to him as a ghost. Great idea which has me eager to keep on reading. This one is definitely a must-read!
Its a cool idea, but it never give much explanation to it, and there are constant jumps in whats happening and things missing and it just isnt great quality
Very fast paced story which takes the story from broke to millionaire in just 2 chapters. Completely illogical story development with some many plot holes that my mind aches just thinking about it.Overall, it's an interesting concept and had great potential - but as usual, author fails to deliver. Fast paced story, glaring plot holes, illogical characters who don't question anything around them, and the list goes on. I hope some other author can do what the Chinese does best and steal the core concept, while giving it the attention to detail it deserves. I genuinely find the thought experiment of "what if you could invade the dreams of other people" interesting - and I really hope that someone would thoroughly explore this in depth. Please hit me up if you do.
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sadly, this novel stopped at ch.433. the author didn't say the reason though.................................................................
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I read a similar story to this novel, but there the villain decided to give up original story and behave like a villain after 1000 restarts.. Seriously, thousand.. There were many other problems in that story. This novel doesn't has the problem which were in that novel. Also, the editing is quite sharp here. This is a very good crisp story. Do read it