Wonderful story - simple, yet captivating. There were a few grammatical errors, but the story was still enjoyable.
Awesome chapters so far. I'm intrigued as it is.
Your characters are amazing. Dei's a strong female lead as James is. Dawn is another interesting character... they all are.
Update soon, please.
Masterpiece is insane…. I read it cuz it was entertaining but after the school arc, all logic went out the window to be quiet honest
Chapter 600: Despite an intriguing concept, the novel disappoints in its execution. The slow pacing, inconsistent character portrayal, poor resource management, and unresolved, dragged-out family subplots detract from the overall enjoyment. Exaggerated conflicts further undermine the story. While I hope future chapters improve to fulfill the story’s potential, it doesn't seem likely.
Most readers don't seem to mind these issues, while others have dropped the novel early on, which I don't blame them for. There are occasional great plots, but they are often ruined by illogical decisions made by the main character, followed by poor excuses.
I still recommend trying it if you don’t mind the small details just don’t expect it to be perfect
does anybody know how to read offline? download chapters?
Hello if it isn't a bother could you tell me too
Yh what Bloooop said, this sh*t fire. In actuality, the VR part ain't like most other novels with it. The real world plot is worth the wait because, well... just read it
You know what, I'm not into cards but since it's Yaoi tag I hope the main couple's relationship is as spicy as the main plot.
The author died so the book will not continue unless someone else decides to pick it up
Man, I feel sorry for ya! The novel won't continue but the good news is, the webtoon will have an original ending! You might have to wait at least 20 years to get there tho.
Hi.. I want you to ask for your permission to re-translate this novel to my language, Arabic on Wattpad.I will give credit to both you and author.Hopefully waiting for your reply.Thank you for your hard work on this novel.
I couldn't read that one, started it but after a while I just got fed up