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increible novela ya faltaba otra buena novela de magos _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Overall a good story, if overly edgy and not particularly well thought out. The setting is about as expansive as you'd expect from a xianxia, which is noteworthy because this was posted almost entirely separate from the genre. It suffers from many of the flaws as well, though, exacerbated since it's shorter than most but tries to cram quite a bit of content into the space.Worth noting that the author has several more chapters posted over on FF . net, but he's also since dropped it in favor of a yet to be posted rewrite, so the story is quite dead.
A really good novel. But the sentences "smiled weakly
Full support and more chapters please....Nayssuuuuuuuuu.MoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMore
This is a great novel, great story, need more reviews everyone. The characters are interesting and the release schedule is great. Some more stuff is needed about the world. Everything else is great though.I believe that it deserves a great cover.
not perfect but good storys i Hope author will go on with it?☺
Okay so let me put this in here since the author hasn't bothered to. It is a harem. So if you're like me who are fed up with them then you won't like this story. It was good up to here, grammar was awful but you could see it gradually get better witch is a plus. The thing that has made me drop is you have guessed it the harem... kinda annoyed the author didn't put it in as I wouldn't have wasted my time if I knew. Worse is this is a modern setting so harem makes even less sense... What kinda annoyed me is that the mc tries to justify that harems are okay and that only true love between a man and woman can have it. Like wtf it's like letting your significant other fck around, would you accept that? No, nobody would. Yeah soooooo, gl to author but pls put in harem tag cause for all the ppl like me it's a waste of time and you wouldn't have to read comments like this.
Great story , hard to get into but worth it , i just hope you continue it._-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-___-_-----_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_____________
I love the story, are they going to continue translating it. I really hope so. The wtiting is really well done that isn’t many stories as nice as this one.
I like food novels and I’m enjoying this one. The main character has a lot more personality, is less detached and more likeable than the leads of Gourmet Food Supplier and Gourmet of Another World. Good food descriptions and interesting world building. Overall, enjoyable and a good read.
I've liked the start very much, first 40-50 chapters are superb. But afterwards the whole story with Thunder King, and him crossing the barrier, I've completely lost interest. He left the first 'world' too fast, so I somehow feel cheated. There was so much left there to explore there.
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