I love the Character design and details. The dialogue between characters is top quality. The story has been nearly perfect, and I want to read more! The writing quality is the cream of this platform. World development is also very unique, and the central goal of the main character has continued to be interesting and hasn't lagged. Again, I want to read more, please.
5 STAR WRITER
This is such a wholesome story!! I love the 'comfortableness' feel ingit bring when reading, such interesting plot and characters
pah pah pah here I come splash slosh shishosh haaaa feel good ( here you go author a 5star review )
lovely !
can't stop thinking about itliterally download the app to read this after my friend told me about it and it did not disappoint. can't wait for more ?
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For reference I read what was free. The story has stable updates, progressed at a stable rate, and is interesting to me. The grammar needs a lot of work, from punctuation placement, to past present and future tense. Some times words or phrases are repeated in the same sentence making it redundant and legenthy for no reason. The MCs powers are pretty standard for cultivation style stories with having two cores and being able to get skills from killed enemy cores so not to original on the front. I like that the MC didnt hesitate when fighting can’t stand when mc acts weak in these type of stories wish you would have explored the job part of the system before charging though. Good luck
I can’t wait to see more in this novel, until now i can feel the pain in her. The way that author explained is easy to understand the feelings in this new novel
Never! Never! Never!
"Yeah go take a rest, dont push your self Fritz."
Hah, the homework is finally finish. Now, just wait for the bell.