Tianfei was still shaking as she thought about the last 10 minutes. Chilong frowned. 'Not Xin Fan? Who could it have possibly been.'
are this dropped???
Amazing story, it has hooked me from first chapter!, The world building is immersive, and the character development is outstanding. Kudos to the author ?
Cultivation stories have probably been around for as long as webnovels existed they might even precede system novels though they have a reputation of being of "Varying quality"so with pancakes making a novel that involves an ancient cultivator we can expect some fresh breeze to that concept and anyone familiar with pancakes's works is expecting quality just like always and so far we are getting exactly that if there is any complaints i might have is that her Murium manner of speaking is a little annoying at first but you get used to it after a while
This story starts promising but quickly becomes trashy.MC is just stupidest complex hero who’s also a hypocrite, disgusting.
this is absolutely amazing the writing and grammar can Improve but overall it's really good, I just wish you don't make the mc a pushover
I love the story, I hope it continues for at least another 100 chapters.
My favorite novel, really like all caracters , world building and the battles
A shameless author doing what a shameless author does. I (as the writer) like where the story is goong but have to say you ought to be patient, as the story is slow and there’s still no action, I asure you it, ll be rewarded, though! So keep on tuned and see where this is going!!
Hi Fallen Ghost!I have to say that I am amazed with the storytelling style. Each chapter was packed with action and narration. While one would expect the narration to be mere fillers, it actually contains in-depth details about this world of magicak kingdom where the story takes place.Lindley the protagonist was a very cheerful and modestly happy guy at the beginning but things quickly took a dark turn right at the first chapter.The story pace was amazing and engaging. The grammar and structures are impeccable. Readers who like magical medieval stories with magical beasts and leveling and system should definitely stop by! Extremely well-written story, wonderful job!
The book is great with regards to the world's backstory and the ongoing character development. It's just that it's so hard to read with a lot of grammatical errors. I suggest the author to get a beta reader or an editor in the side
Wow best book I have read in a while! Keep up the good work. ????????????????????????????