so first the world background is insanely confusing like heavily discribe as medieval then there are cars and simulation equipment? second no clear definite ranking scale like at all its extremely confusing. like 40 pages in and he is already instructor level??? and third alot of typos and other English problems.
Honestly started out really good but you lost me with the multiple systems.
All right review time! This story is amazing, 10/10 for translation. The mc is very smart and is being fleshed out well. 10/10 characters development. The world background hints at a much bigger story and im super excited for. 10/10 world building. overall its a very fun story of a mc slowly building his strength and network. 10/10 would recommend!!! I hope tgis gets picked! Please webnovel pick this one!
Honestly, I like the plot and the characters. The grammar on the other hand is atrocious. Many words are jumbled up with Chinese and the format is also terrible. If only they proofread it and translated it better, then it would have been a good read.
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Okay so I'm only about halfway through what is available to read right now ( chap. 156ish) at this point in the story I have to say it has been very well thought out. No glaring plot holes or inconsistencies. The plot flows from one scenario to another smoothly. Not many grammar errors. So the Mc is a powerful primordial God of destruction who begins to question his and the other gods origins. He decides to destroy the world that he and his family of primordial gods have made to their outrage. He loses the fight to be reborn on the very planet he wanted to destroy and is on a journey to rebuild his strength and have his revenge. If you are down for a dark MC who is meticulous, cunning, ruthless, and merciless this is your novel. The mc has been shown to have a very deep grasp of most situations allowing for a near perfect idea of what would play out allowing him to manipulate most situations to his absolute favor. He also is showing signs of maybe growing as well. Perhaps his time on the world he and his family made will change his outlook a little... or not we shall see .
This Novel ended too soon, nonetheless it a great Novel to read, As it definitely unique and something that I haven't read before and Love, I just wish it didn't end so soon.
I don't know how to reach everyone so this seemed fair. Thank you to everyone for the kind words who have read House of Shadow and hopefully will continue to read it. It's greatly appreciated and keeps me going. Thank you!
The sadness I felt after seeing that there were only 6 chapters was overwhelming, when I looked at the published dates..... I died. Why must this book be drooped. WHY GOD, WHY???
très bon début, très amusant, j'ai hâte de voire la suite. le mc est très jouissif, son pouvoir amène beaucoup de possibilité et est assez original.
First, I have to tell that I haven't watched the Clow Card Sakura series. So, I don't know how CCS fans will react to this book. But, this book is pretty unique in its own way. This book feels more like a japanese novel rather than a chinese one. The mc is more like a typical light novel mc who is always grumping and act cowardly but at crucial times, can be a brave hero. He is not like typical chinese mcs, who immediately changed and become arrogant, shameless or ruthless once he recieves some ability. He holds onto his principles very dearly, not like korean mcs who would adapt to all the darkness in order to survive. Although the plot is subpar, it is the mc's personality that draws me to read this story.