A Blood Stained Night

It's a really good story with a interesting concept and nice face-slapping moments. But sometimes there are moments where the development of the story is just horrible. It seems the author wanted to push the story, but didn't consider if it's plausible. Nevertheless I just skip these moments and ignore them. But the worst problem, and the reason why I'm writing a review, is how the author handles the heroine of the story. The MC is chasing her to 'rescue' her, but the most stupid reasons are holding them apart and 80% of that reasons are caused by the couple. Now already 300+ chapters about the chasing! Now it seems it's over, but I'm sure the author will once again find a way to continou the chase.Really, if from the beginning the couple would be together and travel the worlds, how the MC does this with random girls, it would be one of the best books, even with the stupid development moments.

Honestly started out really good but you lost me with the multiple systems.

This is brandon gould this is my review of your book I have enjoyed the chapters that i have read so far, The concept of the world with superpowers and those with out, reminds me of My hero acadeiema. the world is descirded well, as far as i can tell it is well written, the story is goinfg at a good steady pace and i will be sure to contue to read this story to see where it goes

I like the book but.why few chapter can you make it's in a fast rate

the auther tries his best to make it every thing ground breaking. right from the start.he doesn't has experience.I good story plot. but it is ruined by how impatient the auther was. moreover you are really in a hurry ..the starting is messed. it destroys the taste of the reader.rewrite that. if you want to ensure that people open their wallet for you.

"Oops!" Amelia once again broke his train of thought and Lian Yin couldn't help but sigh once more. This manager of his was way too clumsy to be assigned to him. He stood from his position on the couch and reached out a hand to catch the box that was about to hit Amelia on the head.