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did you really have to make the main character a man sl*t and man wh*re. any person who likes that stuff is a man wh*re and man wh*res are parasite and you know what ppl usually do to those right. you should drop or rewrite the main characterAnd ps yes I just called all the sl*ts who like this novel a man wh*re
12-13 chapter minor spoiler >Interesting premise, simple characters. I like "misunderstanding" tag novels, when they don't feel inappropriate (Like sexual misunderstanding.) and rude (When person is disregarded when he shows humility.), just plain simple joking misunderstanding, and this novel has exactly this.
Writing quality is acceptable...Story line is interesting...There are some interesting girls despite the early chapters...Overally a good dual cultivation novel.. looking forward for further content...
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Congrats for securing a place in WPC 211- 212. Hope to see more chapters in the future, getting served like hot cross buns fresh out of the oven! ;)
It feels like the author took the good parts of every mediocre novel and mashed it together ....not that I'm complaining though . The story is very interesting and protagonist is the correct amount of OP
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Thx for the update?????????? I have been waiting on this for months???? I like novels where there is Dao comprehension and Mc fighting for heavens will?????
It's a great book, fighting author, it's a book to imagine yourself being in a war, highly recommendable for everyone to read and learn that when it comes to achieving a common goal, that what I learned in the first two chapters. Am gonna read more
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didn’t reach 10th chapter because:writing is of bleeding eyes quality. story development is not natural at all, mc find a mineral and oh! the new customer need just that. character design, mc is a fool. he sell thing at stupid low price when he went to search everywhere to find price of everything. Even when customers are surprised he don’t understand. also first customer is an arrogant young master who suddenly become an heavenly bootlicking dog for mc.wont add more, my rating is not me spamming 1* everywhere but real result of each point. maybe things go better later but i didn’t reach there
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