A fresh story line. It is interesting to read a story about an MC that has recurring dreams. Your story has potential to develop into something great. keep on writing, would love to see an update!
wow?loving this book,so Capitvating.❤️❤️
Wild megane-ojisan spotted! It used Review! It's super effective! Hey, it's a sci-fi fanfic which actually got me hankering to play the game it's based on lol. That, in itself, speaks volumes about the work.The work you put in with introducing the overall setting and lore is worthy of applause. And the fanfic itself is engaging enough. The grammar is good. It just has some hiccups occasionally, but not enough to detract from the reading experience.All in all, a stellar read. Great job!
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History has a future. Only the beginning seemed very familiar with another novel, and the story is going well. Author, continue with the story, as your future can be great, depending on how you use the eye powers of the MC along with the system.
I've read 20 chapters and in those chapters the MC remains a simp and he doesn't even know how to use attribute points. Worst experience reading ?
Pretty good plotline, though I can help but see that most chaps get filled up by censored curses lately...LMAO. I like the character growth (actually relatable in a sense), and with the "puppet master in the background"-esque foreshadow, makes this quite a great read. Kudos to the author!
dear author, the story is quite captive and a good deal of time. The story of high school students always got me. The ways his life changed after break up its interesting to read. keep it up dear.......
I think I have read a story with similar plot to this before. Does someone know about that story? I can't particularly remember the name. The mc had to follow the mission which were same as these.If someone does know, please send me a message.
This is really good! Their loyalty to each other is really amazing yet still heart breaking. I got this recommendation from other fics, tumblr and Twitter.
i gave 5 stars just because the story was unique. Thats all. Really getting desperate to read non cliche ones and this week had 3 good ones imo
please tell me this novel raw and where to find it i really like it please please please please.this novel is incredible but where was his raw tell me