The story is ok but I read ahead in the raws and - not joking in the slightest - genuinely hilarious dialogue even with MTL. I highly suggest you vote for this.
low score due the locked chapters after chapter 5, don't know if the author is greedy or something else, but having chaps locked so early on makes keeping up with story hard on a .daily basis, at max one can get 3 free passes, and there are other worth it books that get this passes, I can't possibly invest all only in this book just so I can have enough pleasure reading this chapter.
for some reason, I can't remove this from my library... I tried to remove this novel, with one other, the other novel was deleted, but this one didn't get removed...
Honestly speaking I am quite an optimistic person and not someone who uses practical logics all the time so at first I thought that I'll just give this a shot and then drop but~!-See where it lead me!Anyways it is a real fun novel for those who see the world more practically than others and as well as for those who are like me!not that 'realistic'. Both kinds of people can give this a try. Trust me just give this 'a try' ! and the rest is history!
This is the third or forth time I've tried to get into this story, but again the bad grammar and characters etc. have kept me from getting past the first few chapters.This is a shame because there seem to be some interesting ideas that I'd love to read about.9 months ago as of writing this review the Author said that they were going to proofread/edit the start of the novel. Either this hasnt happened or they havent quite done a good enough job.Overall, a story with interesting ideas, but poor execution lets it down especially when compared to a few of the other system novels.
Decent novel, incredibly slow updates. One chapter a week isn't even guaranteed. It's been 20 days since the release of chapter 259. Also for those wasting spirit stones, you can find many "webnovel" books for free at gravity tales, including this one.
I'm not going to spoil anything for anyone, well content wise anyway... Also before I forget this gets into so really dark topics and descriptions so if you are a whiny brat that can deal with ***** content I suggest you don't touch this Im not hating on it but this guy has put a hellish amount of time into crafting a brilliant story. However, the first 20 or so chapters you either love or hate, hell even the author himself states this and I agree the beginning is very info based and alters between a typical cn reincarnation, okay I lied it follows some of the norms but it's not some goody two shoes greedy kid that has no idea how the world works or what is sex, and a man with a plan that knows what he wants also he's like god their op so is his waifu collection they be scary. Also he has tons of pop culture references, he is a man of culture. But after chapter 20 it picks up and gets like super good like binge worthy good, also these aren't short chapters the average chapter length is 30ish pages long, but yeah it's one hell of a novel I'd recommend it. Also just a shout out to the author keep up the work my friend I'm not putting this one down like ever. End of rant
love Ten! and Devin's realization about her.
Awesome job
What is up with this writer. Can’t they get more then 10 short pages together
I ENJOY THE BOOK. NO CURSING, NO EXPLICIT SEX SCENES. IF BLAKE WANTS JESSICA HE NEEDS TO GET BACKBONE. CAN'T STAND ALL THE ABUSE JESSICA GETS BECAUSE SHE WAS A MUTE! GET RID OF CHANG YAN. I AM GETTING FRUSTRATED AS TO HOW MANY CHAPTERS THERE ARE. I THOUGHT THIS WAS TO BE A ROMANCE NOVEL?
A very good story