From wath I read this has a kinda scadderd story, but it seems to be getting a little better chapter by chapter. The main character is the only character we really know, because we haven't gotten a lot of information about the other characters or wath they are thinking. On the other hand this is a story from Tha mc's point of view so why would she know what the others are thinking. It would de good to get an actual date for updates but I think getting one or two updates a week is fine even if a date isn't set. The writer makes a few writing mistakes here and there, but it isn't that much of a problem. I'd like to know more about how smart the mc is. She has knowledge, but how much of it?
