this one is highly recommendable.just to get it over, it have the classic elements, OP MC, knowledge about game, unfair advantage etc.now that has been said, its still super good.we have a MC who is not in this game to be the best, or to have revenge by dominating the game, but a young lad, who play the game to honor a good friend by enjoying it as much ad possible.along the way we met some sidechic.... i mean side characters who each have their own personality and goals, which is kinda refreshing, they aint just follow-along wannabies as we seen before, because a MC need a stable 5man team.this novel is among the few i always have on top ready to read more from, and if it continue along the path its on now, is one i will read for a long time.fully recommended
I dont see any negative reviews so i suppose this will no be here long. I hava a lot of issues with this one... First is wording in sentences, additional words and explanation of poitless facts over and over again. Next is the story, i got to chap 80 and I am so bored with all the pointlessnes of MC actions and his logic, i thought that if he was a gang member he would be resourcefull if not smat but, but he is just swayed by any little thing and every decision is made by others. There are no feeling and depresion as author advertised... Just a cliche fantasy with nothing new. Only positive is side characters but that cannot save whole book. I hoped for something in there but got only boredom and bad english.
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You did a good job puting the book together and making sure all of the details are put together really well. The book is really good and I really like it a lot.
This is arguably the best smut novel on the entire platform. The charcters, the scenes, the story everything is well thought. The R-18 chapters are balanced and honestly this novel deserves more credit. Good work author-sama.
I'm not sure why people are taking this story so seriously and decrying it for being unrealistic. Personally I find it hilarious. Yes it's nonsense. However, it's a system novel. It's supposed to be nonsense. All that matters is if it's a fun read or not and this novel tickles my funny bone just right with it's fun antics and depiction of people being torn between being impressed with the MC and annoyed with his antics. Nobody is flying off the handle about their "honor" being soiled like in the more "main stream" Chinese novels. Instead, they handle their embarrassment more like mature adults. In that way this novel is actually more "realistic" than typical Chinese novels.
don't bother reading unless you don't mind MTL cause after 40 it drops in quality immediately.better to not waste the money or the fp on it
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What is even going on? I enjoy my fair share of garbage novels and generally don't review them negatively, but this one makes no sense. Nothing is explained whatsoever. What is this tower? What are these territories? Where are they fighting? Another example of confusion: Guy uses a 10000 times card on a newborn wolf to grow it to a youth. But 10000 times what? Times 1 second or 1 minute or 1 day? No one knows. Even garbage novels need to have some semblance of sense. Absolute vomit tier novel.
Love love love me a book from Jordan Silver!!!! I've read all your books and can't say there is one I don't love.I especially love how these recent ones bring in the other characters from other books like Lyon and Gabriel (two of my favorite guys and read over and over again)! Hot sexy alpha dudes are a way to my heart for sure. I will say sometimes it seems like the chapters repeat themselves meaning the characters say the same thing but a little different with a word or two but that's ok cause I love reading your stories and fantasize having my own alpha take over. Great read and please don't wait to long for the continuing of this story. Can't wait!!
Half of the women in this are w*0r*§. I recommend it if you like women who get with anyone they find attractive.
I didn't read even one chapter yet and i am already giving it a rating. This is completely illogical and at the very least idiotic for me. What can one do? Some times one can only be blind fools. Even if this is the trashiest of book, i cannot regret it. It is an Ergen book after all. It has been years since i have read anything by him, the writing was absolutely not perfect and it is unfortunate that my reading time is not much now, but this book is automatically in the library and a minimum rating is also given. Ergen still deserve some blind faith given his past deeds.