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good work!??? keep it up, author! You had done amazing work. I hope you will get success in this. Your web novel story is incredible. . .?
This is an amazing book, at 1st i was skeptical because most books with high ratings on webnovel aren't that good but this novel deserves it rating and more. My only regret is that I didn't begin reading this book sooner.
It's definitely one of the best story I've read in webnovel. Really good character design and so far It's not a harem. I am hoping it will continue this way and become OTP. The story development and world building is also well written. I can see this story evolving in a new way with how the world keeps expanding. I am very satisfied with the story. Hope the author can continue to write this beautiful story.
The MC ruined it for me. He is a skirt chasing otaku in simple terms. Which is fine if it was executed well and didn't influence his choices.
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Honestly I REALLY like this book. it has a fun concept that is nice to read while also incorporating game elements into it. The only problem I have with it is the spelling mistakes but that’s only a minor problem.
It is a good book but I feel like it took forever for him to be the I thought he would become a God in the 1st to 3rd chapter or somewhere close to that that is the only thing that I didn't like it feels real slow
this is a plagiarized book. so disappointing that the one who published this here could also be a Noxian?
I just love it all!! Sooooo cute!!!Such nice history! So heart warming!!The world could be so much brighter if there were more people like then! I couldn't stop reading until the last post! I want to uncover every hiden story that's been peaking!!♡♡♡♡♡
Interesting story with a lot of potential!The shifting POV is a nice touch.There are a few grammar errors in each chapter... nothing that affects your understanding and its most likely due to typos imo.Author, you can try using something like Grammarly to get rid of minor errors like this, its really helpful.The ML seems to be really stone-hearted at the start, but I can see where his character is coming from.Best of luck author, I belive that you can take the story to greater heights.
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