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Ohh...my my my.. now the story is building.. and what happens next ...woof that last chapter 50... M hitched..❤️❤️❤️❤️When are we getting moreeeeeeeeee..............❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
Nice. This book is peculiar, that's why I like it. But being honest, it is a little fast paced and confusing. If you can clear somethings up, I will really appreciate. Thanks, author-san
So far, the story is okay. I hope it continues to be that way and gets better and characters and world gets fleshed out as the story progresses.
Next Update Morena. Accelerate your storytelling. I'm waiting for hot hot hot
great story with good character development. I am excited for every new release. There Is just one thing that Is not so good and that Is over explanations, dear author se are not stupid. Story progression Is great a I am all for slow stories but that Is with relevant side stories or some interesting gimick. MC loosing in his thoughts Is not interesting side gimick. overall great novel
l love it. l love it. l love it. l love it. l love it. I LOVE IT. This is one of the best farming magic novel I've ever read. Thanks to the Author for the wonderful story.
I love the description of the story,let's read!
Chapter 1 is so disconnected and disjointed from the rest of the chapters.I can't figure out the anything after chapter 1 so maybe create a natural flow ?
Writing quality, Story Development, world background ground are all good
this book seems interesting . looking forward for new releases
This book is way more awesome than it says.The world building is awesome taking you to a breath taking scene.The character development and the plot design all far exceed the mind.Even the writing style is good. Quite simple and easily flowing.Great work author and great world. Will carry it out!!
Hello everyone. I'm the author of this novel. I have been trying to improve my writing for this whole year. I hope this time I didn't make those silly mistakes. Hope you all will enjoy it even though it might be lacking as I'm not a professional yet. Thank you.
