Hello, I'm Min, the author of the story. This is my first novel I'm writing here on Webnovel. I'm not a pro, so please pardon the lots of mistakes you will encounter in the story. I write stories because it is fun, but I'll give my best in writing this story and update as often as I can. So I hope you'll give a chance to read the story till its last chapter. Thank you for reading my novel.
it starts off decently but pretty soon you're introduced to the mc's annoying, childish, and sometimes hypocritical personality. he's also very stupid. a lot of his decisions are stupid, and he's very emotional - not in a good way. emotions are fine, but they're annoying when the only thing they do to a character is limit them and make it frustrating to read. he's also kind of hypocritical. early on when he goes into the world where time has stopped outside and everyone has to get insignias or whatever, he decides to destroy the world (the fake world, not earth) because a lot of people will die otherwise. but it's just stupid and hypocritical because everyone in that world decided to be there knowing the risks and knowing they may die. why does he have any right to destroy the world and "save" all these people from the risks? the mc is really annoying, so i had to drop it
The author has taken a typical isekai story and put an interesting twist on it. The characters are well thought out, story progression feels smooth, and the payoff is worthwhile. I've enjoyed reading this story very much.
I should have read the reviews and analyze the introduction carefully since why is there a fut@ word before reading... Dropped it at chapter 20...
The Story is Amazing and the Alternate Timeline of the Story is Progressing, The update on the Chapters needs to be improved a bit, can't wait for the part where Tzeentch, will join his brother to the Old World, and more reactions of every force's faction in the Old World, when they find out about the 4th Brother, which will be the champion of Tzeentch
This is the type of book I’m looking for on this app.. I love this book.. and I love the story ??…. Nah this book needs more attention …. One of the best books…….….….
the start is trilling the story seem kinda dark but naah who cares got a potential and room to become good story i will suport you aswell Author-nim
An interesting book, and a new approach on the chatgroup type stories. fights are interesting, and I'm always waiting for the story to unfold in the new chapters. maybe as a warning that the mc has some hidden power in him that we don't know much about, but seems a OP. (casting tier 5 magic when the guy is tier 0)
I would say that the theme has potential since it's not one of the most used ones. In the beginning instead of meeting Truck-kun we met Storm-sama wich failed to do her work miserably and our mc was saved and teleported to a new world to participate in "quests". My first problem with this novel is the under-developed characters (we seem to get one more companion in each world he goes to, companions that I personally don't give a damn about, except Alina cuz she was the first and the main female protagonist, but under-developed nontheless). Second big problem is the fact that the start and ending of all 4 volumes that I read till now are pretty bad, instead of exploring the world with the protagonist we get 2-3 chapters in the POV of a random character wich we don't know nothing about and get some useless info dump, wich is pretty bad in my opinion I would prefer to see the protagonist view and not some random guy, while in the ending of a volume the protagonist doesn't have time to do anything after completing the main mission he and his companions are instantly teleported to another world, wich in my opinion is a big problem since we can't see any progression in the MC's relationship with his companions cuz they're always in the missions, a 1-2 days vacation after the main mission end would be really appreciated as we could use that time to digest some information about the world that the protagonist is about to leave and get some character development...The Fairy is a problem as well since she doesn't seem to like her work that much, fairies in novels usually have a mischievous personality, this one has one too, instead of giving the information that she needs to give as a Guide she always seems to be giving the information after it's useless or a during a situation that it can become usefull, wich is pretty annoying to me since it gets boring really fast and it's not really a good way to make character development.All that said I'm still enjoying the novel and will probably continue reading it for some time, might come back to change to review if I see it getting better or worse, really hope a few of these points change in the future. **: Since i'm not a native english speaker and it's been a while since I had to write a big text I would like to apologize to the readers for problems with past/present/future situations and other things. PS2: These are my opinions and as such no1 needs to take it at face value :PTy for reading this if you did and Goodbye =)
Good story but needs some editing. It's hard to read but still doable. I love the story though. Hope to read more of it ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
This story is so amazing.. wanna know the rest of it.. hatred.. love.. revenge.. that kind of story always make me smiles ?? please continue writing this story ya..
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